Well well... I'm all sorts of intrigued! Is Billy the William she is now after or is she using him to get to Buffy's William? Oooo! Can't wait to find out! Loved Buffy and William's sexy time! Without knowing it, William got what he's been wanting. A Buffy who loves him and shows it when making love with him! I thought it was funny that she added "by the way" after telling him she loves him. It's so Buffy to keep it light!

Author's Response: Those scenes are hard to write, to be honest. You don't want to cross the line into super-mush. Lucikly, Buffy won't let me do that very often :)

"I suspect we’re doing this a bit backwards, love.”

“Don’t we always?” She had him there — she really did.

Eeeee!! :) Finally, some progress on the romantic front... erm, I guess actually they've been progressing on that front a while and they've finally gotten there, albeit a bit backwards. :) Loved the tender, and the revelation that it really was, for all intents and purposes, Buffy's first time ever with him. Love that mental puzzle. A perfect place to cut off with the happiest cliff hanger imaginable. And Billy the Kid messing around with these crazy kids... Really looking forward to see where this all goes. Mucho potetial. Can't wait! Hope real life cooperates enough. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hey Buffyrat. I just had a very long car trip across the middle of the US and brought season 2 with me, to listen to in the car. When Buffy was turned into a rat, I thought of you! Thanks for the feedback, as always!

First of all, of course YAY! for Buffy finally being able to silence William and say what she wanted to. And yay for how she silenced him! heehee! Billy the Kid, huh? Soooo, does that mean Dru won't be after 'her' William now? I doubt that's what it means, but ... not sure. You probably went over this before (I'm sure you did, actually, but I have a mind like a steel .... sieve), but how are we avoiding the whole if William isn't turned by Dru then Spike never exists so Buffy would've never known him and he would've never died closing the Hellmouth scenario? I guess the PTB are mojoing that, but it's got me wondering since that bit of info has apparently slipped through the holes in my brain. Loved the update! Hope RL eases up!

Author's Response: Hey, finally back in town. Thanks for the review. In the 23rd chapter of Yours, William they discuss time travel and it boils down to "they don't know." IF William is never turned (and he still may be) then Jonathan suggested an alternate dimension as a possibility.