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Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2012 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter 27

Whew! This was a whirlwind, to say the least! You certainly know how to write a sizzling sex scene. I don't think everyone realises that writing a good, cliche-free sex scene is quite hard, so kudos for that! :) And the plot thickens with the death of Henrietta.

And I've got to say, I have an irrational fear of porcelain dolls, so thank you for totally creeping me out with the whole Miss Edith scene where she smiled. *shudders* Why are porcelain dolls so scary?? lol

Good luck with writing chapter 30, btw!! I know all too well what it's like to be stuck writing a chapter, so here's to inspiration! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! You really have to be in the right mood to write sex. It's kind of work no matter what, really. It did feel odd to cram all the sex in one area of the story, but I wanted to mirror Billy/Dru with William/Buffy. I had an inimated jpg of a doll looking at their owner an owner freaking out that I nearly added to this! THanks!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2012 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 27

Boy, oh boy! There goes Warren messing up all kinds of things, probably. He has to some how be involved or just the messenger, or something, and I want to know. And what is up with Miss Edith?! Creepy moving dolls are by far the creepiest. And all the prophesy to change the slayer line... Don't think this is what Dru was expecting. Or Buffy for that matter, though I'm glad we tumbled the Walrus Brothers. I'm sure they will huff all good and proper now. How they've all been played. I can't wait! Update soon! (And tell us that secret you won't tell us until you tell us... I think... :) )

Author's Response: I think I've decided to change the fate of a character after all and I will explain about that but in the future because now would be HUGELY spoilerific. More answers (and probably another question or two) in the next chappie! Nice to hear from you as always!

Reviewer: Inara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2012 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh, how the plot thickens!!!

Arg!!! Must. Update. Immediately.

This was a great chapter... so many questions I must have answers to. Warren was coaching Dru through Miss Edith, right? So how did he go away? Did the PTB finally get their asses in gear and realize that their best slayer needed a hand?? Although, how does killing the current slayer get Buffy back her powers?? So many question. Please update soon!!!! Thanks again!

Author's Response: I think a whole lot of those questions will be answered in the next chapter, which I am about 1200 words into so far. Thanks for the feedback Inara!

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2012 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh boy! Well, you got the waterworks from me when Buffy remembered being Elizabeth and got all the memories from 'the future' back. So - good job! And Buffy's the Slayer ... again! Will Giles' grandmother make an appearance as her Watcher? Will that mean Dru and William will come after her now?

The train sex was yummy. Very good job on both their parts staying quiet, too! And, oh, darn about the walrus bros. toppling down! LOL! If they landed on their heads, then I'm sure they were not hurt in the making of this scene.

And what of Miss Edith? What the heck happened there? Guess I'll have to wait and see. Does that mean Dru's gonna lose her power of sight?

Hmmm ... lots going on - can't wait for more!

Author's Response: P4S, when you said something about Buffy being the slayer in the last chapter, I was SO GOOD and didn't give you a spoiler!! I'm crap at keeping secrets ordinarily. I almost nuked the trainsex bit because I wasn't sure how it fit with the Dru/Billy stuff, so I'm glad you talked about it. In the end, I decided it fit ok and mirrored Dru and Billy and worked with it that way. Two of your questions will be answered next chapter: what of Miss Edith and will Dru be pursued. Well, mostly that one will be answered. Hmmm. Difficult to ... Anyway! I will answer the Watcher question as well, but not ... next chapter. This is me, shutting up!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2012 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter 27

I kinda love that you called Robert Louis Stevenson Bobby Lou.

Author's Response: Only because "Bobby Lou Steve" sounds too much like "Stevie Ray Vaughn." Thanks so much for beta'ing and making me look at expanding the ending. I was galloping toward the finish line and you saw how I could have made it better. Thank you again

Reviewer: Jelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2012 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter 27

Every time I see there's an update, I hear a little Homer Simpson-esque 'Woohoo!' in my head.
Wow, wow, wow, I know I've been bugging you about where Elizabeth went, but wowsers, you've taken it to a new level. I can't imagine or predict what's gonna happen next and I can hardly wait to find out (short of sitting in front of your abode and asking in a pitiful voice, which would be creepy to the nth degree).

Author's Response: You didn't bug. I'll have to write about that in an author's note (thanks for reminding me). I was trying to balance a lot of things as I begin to wind up the story and getting her memory back was something I hoped to do. But when you and a few others let me know how important it was to you, I rearranged a few things and set it as a priority. Writing, at least for me, really is a TEAM effort with you guys being part of the team. So happy you liked this chapter :)

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