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Reviewer: Nana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2012 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Your story is outstanding! I enjoyed the adjoining piece and this is a great sequel. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Nana. Nice to hear from you

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2012 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter 28

I just find this so interesting. Billy the Kid is a hoot as a vampire. Hope you're feeling lots better.

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you like Billy. I sorta do too :) It's fun to climb inside his head.

Reviewer: ragpants Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2012 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 28

OOOh! Ogden!

Can't wait for more.

Hope you're feeling better.

Author's Response: And the first person in the history of ever to be excited about OGDEN!

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2012 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter 28

Ooooo - Wow - twists and turns! The PTB are tricky suckers! And not entirely nice, basically killing their own Slayer like that. Bad PTB, BAD! Poor Buffy - you had me laughing (about the fruitcake gift) and misty eyed at the same time. And now William and Dru will be after William and, therefore, Buffy. Oh my! Very worrisome, indeed!

Hope you're feeling better and can lure your muse out to play so we can see what happens when both of Dru's Williams meet.

Author's Response: Thanks. The end is in sight, I just have to hack through a bit of a jungle to get there.

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2012 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 17

I loved this chapter, even though it made my cry. Maybe because of that. I must be a masochist!

Author's Response: Thanks. It's been a rough week - that was nice to hear

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2012 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 16

I can't believe George died. This completely broke my heart as I came to adore his character so, so much. Even though it made me cry (you're not the only dork here), I applaud you for going through with it because I know it must have been a struggle.

Author's Response: He was hard to kill. And I'm so glad that you understand! Thanks for your words

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2012 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter 15

The scene with William so boldly undressing in front of Buffy was deliciously visual. Thank you for that. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 14

Is it possible to be melted into a puddle of goo, going 'awww' and fan yourself from the incredible hotness of it all?? Only here! :) Got to say I was very delighted to see the return of the ultimate Victorian cock blocking device. How kinky! I like. ;)

Author's Response: Haha. Originally, when I plotted this, the scene was very bondage like and Buffy was in pissed mode. By the time the scene came along, their relationship was at a different point and that wouldn't have worked

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 13

Oh man, I'm loving the UST!!! Also, how incredibly stupid and courageous of William to plan on killing Dru. Can't wait to see who falls asleep first. Aaah, this story is like a balm on my over-stressed soul. Bless you, Puddin. ;)

Author's Response: Oh thanks hon! :)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter 12

I have a bit of free time from writing my major project and I'm sure as hell going to read another chapter of this delightful story! :D The attention to the historic details is just amazing. I LOVE IT! Can't wait to find why William sent Buffy off to have a bath.

Author's Response: You are too kind to leave so many reviews. Thank you. I'm currently stuck in a chapter and reading your words is a balm :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2012 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 27

Boy, oh boy! There goes Warren messing up all kinds of things, probably. He has to some how be involved or just the messenger, or something, and I want to know. And what is up with Miss Edith?! Creepy moving dolls are by far the creepiest. And all the prophesy to change the slayer line... Don't think this is what Dru was expecting. Or Buffy for that matter, though I'm glad we tumbled the Walrus Brothers. I'm sure they will huff all good and proper now. How they've all been played. I can't wait! Update soon! (And tell us that secret you won't tell us until you tell us... I think... :) )

Author's Response: I think I've decided to change the fate of a character after all and I will explain about that but in the future because now would be HUGELY spoilerific. More answers (and probably another question or two) in the next chappie! Nice to hear from you as always!

Reviewer: Inara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2012 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh, how the plot thickens!!!

Arg!!! Must. Update. Immediately.

This was a great chapter... so many questions I must have answers to. Warren was coaching Dru through Miss Edith, right? So how did he go away? Did the PTB finally get their asses in gear and realize that their best slayer needed a hand?? Although, how does killing the current slayer get Buffy back her powers?? So many question. Please update soon!!!! Thanks again!

Author's Response: I think a whole lot of those questions will be answered in the next chapter, which I am about 1200 words into so far. Thanks for the feedback Inara!

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2012 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh boy! Well, you got the waterworks from me when Buffy remembered being Elizabeth and got all the memories from 'the future' back. So - good job! And Buffy's the Slayer ... again! Will Giles' grandmother make an appearance as her Watcher? Will that mean Dru and William will come after her now?

The train sex was yummy. Very good job on both their parts staying quiet, too! And, oh, darn about the walrus bros. toppling down! LOL! If they landed on their heads, then I'm sure they were not hurt in the making of this scene.

And what of Miss Edith? What the heck happened there? Guess I'll have to wait and see. Does that mean Dru's gonna lose her power of sight?

Hmmm ... lots going on - can't wait for more!

Author's Response: P4S, when you said something about Buffy being the slayer in the last chapter, I was SO GOOD and didn't give you a spoiler!! I'm crap at keeping secrets ordinarily. I almost nuked the trainsex bit because I wasn't sure how it fit with the Dru/Billy stuff, so I'm glad you talked about it. In the end, I decided it fit ok and mirrored Dru and Billy and worked with it that way. Two of your questions will be answered next chapter: what of Miss Edith and will Dru be pursued. Well, mostly that one will be answered. Hmmm. Difficult to ... Anyway! I will answer the Watcher question as well, but not ... next chapter. This is me, shutting up!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2012 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter 27

I kinda love that you called Robert Louis Stevenson Bobby Lou.

Author's Response: Only because "Bobby Lou Steve" sounds too much like "Stevie Ray Vaughn." Thanks so much for beta'ing and making me look at expanding the ending. I was galloping toward the finish line and you saw how I could have made it better. Thank you again

Reviewer: Jelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2012 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter 27

Every time I see there's an update, I hear a little Homer Simpson-esque 'Woohoo!' in my head.
Wow, wow, wow, I know I've been bugging you about where Elizabeth went, but wowsers, you've taken it to a new level. I can't imagine or predict what's gonna happen next and I can hardly wait to find out (short of sitting in front of your abode and asking in a pitiful voice, which would be creepy to the nth degree).

Author's Response: You didn't bug. I'll have to write about that in an author's note (thanks for reminding me). I was trying to balance a lot of things as I begin to wind up the story and getting her memory back was something I hoped to do. But when you and a few others let me know how important it was to you, I rearranged a few things and set it as a priority. Writing, at least for me, really is a TEAM effort with you guys being part of the team. So happy you liked this chapter :)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love reading your author's notes. Hilarious! :D Also, very much loving Buffy's seizing of power instead of whining.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad she found her stones at last too

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oooh, a cat fight!! :D I'm hoping, at least. This shall be interesting.

Author's Response: Not to say it won't happen ... ever, however...

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 9

How can something be both absolutely hot and so freaking heartbreaking??

Author's Response: Yay. Thanks. Glad that was your response

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 8

I do believe Dr. Crowdner has a bit of a voyeuristic streak. ;) Also, how did they treat hysteria in men, or were men simply not believed to suffer from such an affliction?? I imagine they would use some kind of ball-tickler.

Author's Response: I wish! The 'weaker, emotional' females were the only ones afflicted. Dipshit dudes...

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 7

Aaah, I'm enjoying this story too much. Sinfully so!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Treating hysteria with orgasms? Ingenious, I say. Ingenious! After all, crazy ladies just need to get laid, right? ;) And I'm horribly pervy for saying this, but I'm hoping William and Buffy will try to take advantage of this... ehm... advanced technology.

Author's Response: Crazy huh? It's where we get the word "hysterictomy" from and everything :( Women weren't supposed to get a happy from sex. Poor fools

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hahaha... should we call you Puddin the Bloody? :D That magnificent poem totally made my day. The height of artistry, I say, and everyone who dares to disagrees deserves to be whipped! Poor Sepp thinking with his weisswurst rather than his bigger head. May he and his hard on rest in peace.

Author's Response: Ha, thanks for this. I had forgotten entirely about the poem :)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

Well... shit. I'd say that explains William's situation quite perfectly, wouldn't you? Also, is it weird that I never found the whole chaining Buffy up thing weird? I honestly don't know what they were so upset about. He did it because she wouldn't listen! Or the Buffybot... come on, if you could, wouldn't you want a... let's say a Spikebot of your own?? No? Is it just me who has no morals? Okay then.

Author's Response: Preachin to the choir. I was always on his side and wrote an unpublishable response to her being chained up once too!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh. Holy. Shit. Certainly did not expect this twist! I feel William won't have it easy after Buffy wakes up. :(

Brilliant job!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad it surpised you. I had to go with Warren to echo jonathan in the last book :)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Who's the Shining Man?? I presume it's someone from the future, but who? He's obviously after Buffy... aaah, gotta find out more! Loving your writing style. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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