
Date: 11/03/2013 - 03:06 pm Title: Part Two
I adore this story. Will we ever get the last chapter? please...

Date: 03/14/2013 - 06:37 pm Title: Part Two
Love this! Will it be finished?

Date: 03/21/2012 - 06:01 am Title: Part Two
Oh, I love this fic! It's so sweet/hot... Please continue : )

Date: 10/02/2011 - 09:39 pm Title: Part Two
Awe - things are definitely going somewhere - seems as if William got himself a girlfriend. :)
Maybe their parents have an inkling.... looking forward to more.

Date: 09/24/2011 - 03:53 pm Title: Part Two
Your right, shy William is just adorable in the eat him up like chocolate way.
The parents are not worried because shy William is responsible. At least they don't care cause they are probaly reliving their youth again. and than someone will mention them being gone so long, and the word sex. Then someone else will say as long as she does not get pregnant. And than Hank will get all red faced.

Date: 09/24/2011 - 02:26 am Title: Part Two
Yeah, that crossed my mind about the time they were heading down the pier. No question that was going to take a while. ;) Love all their timid adoration, and nearly died when he told her he gave her his first kiss. I suspect she nearly did, too. Eh, their parents are probly drunk, I remember beach trips like that. Only nothing I ever did was this sweet. I love it. Hopefully it's not too long before an update. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 09/23/2011 - 09:23 pm Title: Part Two
Totally loving this! Can't wait to read more!

Date: 09/23/2011 - 07:46 pm Title: Part Two
Guh!!! HOT! My brain has turned into a big pile of mush! Very steamy and intimate scene, plus I love how well written your stories always are. The characters always have depth and insecurities, which makes them even more real.
Hee... really wondering what their parents are thinking. God, I hope none of them has went to search for Buffy and Spike only to see them in such a compromising situation. Although, it might be fun to see the parents pretend like nothing's going on. *g*
LOVE your William stories. You're definitely not the only one with William kink. ;) I love how vulnerable he is.

Date: 09/23/2011 - 02:46 pm Title: Part Two
I hope Buffy & William aren't too traumatized by their parents when they finally return to the campfire! Thanks for another wonderful update to such an enjoyable story! More soon please!

Date: 09/23/2011 - 01:29 pm Title: Part Two
I just assumed their parents were high again. This was lovely, and I agree, there is something so compelling about William. He's the broken heart at the center of this iconic character that makes Spike real.