Date: 04/09/2012 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter 23
first sex scene? Dear lord, I'm excited for your next!! Fantastic work! SO hot
Date: 04/06/2012 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 23
yeah baby! excellent job! gotta go find my husband...
Date: 03/27/2012 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 23
Seems like you had a pretty impressive first time for your first written sex scene. Well done! A very natural turn of events for them. Looking forward to see how they sweet talk Joyce into letting them stay a couple. :) Update soon!
Author's Response: To be honest with you, hahaha NO. I'm old enough to be writing this stuff (I promise you) but I am actually a virgin... *innocent smiley face* I've just read a LOT of fanfiction and it helps with the writing. I'm glad I did well on this chapter, thank you for the review! :)
Date: 03/26/2012 - 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter, left me wanting more. Hehe
Date: 03/26/2012 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter, love the spuffyness. I love their relationship. Keep the spuffyness coming.
Date: 03/26/2012 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter I'm looking forward to the next one.