Iivyy13,

I just started reading and I have to tell ya - I had to read the whole thing through!

I'm loving the interaction between Buffy and Spike. Cute, shy glances and flirty behavior is always great to read! Think you had a few of us worried with the serious tone of their lunch conversation, but I had faith that you would keep them together!

I also have to say, that I'm enjoying how your playing with Spike and Buffy's green eyed monsters! It's not over the top and I really do like that about this piece! Although I'm sure you'll give us readers a run for our money with that!

I was a little worried when you named Andrew as Dawn's intended, but I have a good feeling I know where your headed. I especially liked that last scene with Dawn and Andrew! Everyone tries to work in her famous "GET OUT, GET OUT!" line and I do think you nailed it!

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!

G_Ivy

Hey hum love the story so far, I would love you to bring Connor in, as maybe a cousin or something of spikes and get him and dawn together, think they would really suit xxx thanks update soon xxx

Author's Response: Sounds like an interesting idea, not too sure about for Dawn cause there's a lot of Andrew stuff left to deal with there, but its possible :-) Thanks for reading and Thankyou for the review!

So more personal time between Buffy and Spike with the sharing of the apartment..
Was wondering about Andrew..
enjoying

Author's Response: Yep more closeness is what I'm going for :-) Andrew and Dawn are very undecided, I'm not even sure where they're going. Thankyou for the review!