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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2012 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter 4

I just love there self reflection. She's gonna marry him and he's gonna push her away. Too bad she's way more persistent with a better history of successful plans. :) Okay, that's actually not too bad at all. Can't wait for more banter, and to see who breaks first! Update soon!

Author's Response: Buffy is pretty determined. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing. You rock.

Reviewer: HiddenFan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2012 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 4

Fanning my blushing cheeks even as I type...

Author's Response: Yay! That is exactly what I was going for. ;)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2012 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 4

Hee... so Buffy decided Spike is going to be her husband, huh? Gotta admire a woman who knows what she wants. :D Looks like she's slowly wearing down his defenses and I LOVE the slow burn between them!! He doesn't stand a chance against Buffy's stubbornness. *gg* Can't wait for more of this delicious story!!!

Author's Response: He woke up some kind of sleeping lust monster inside Buffy, there's only so much he can do. :D Thank you. I am so happy to have you on board!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2012 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh Dear. That girl is primed to get her heart broken into a million pieces. She reminds me of someone I know, though. There's something so realistic about her even though she's acting in an extreme way. I really enjoyed this chapter. One thing--wizened means withered and shriveled and I think you were trying to say wisened up. Spell check probably automatically changed your Whedonization of the word.

Author's Response: Arghh...I hate when I leave mistakes. :( Thank you for telling me. I think most nice girls are more plotting than guys give them credit for. Also, I think someone as cute as Buffy would be used to getting any guy she wanted. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: demona424 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2012 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yes, Spike is completely nuts but I believe that our plucky little heroine Buffy will wear him down. I just love her determination!

Author's Response: Aww...Spike is not completely nuts. He is 26 years old and works as a mechanic, a nineteen year old college girl is a risky choice. There are both practical issues and a lot of insecurities at play there. I don't know what country you are from but in the U.S. a lot of bars don't allow underage folks to even come in. For a guy like Spike, who is used to hanging out and playing pool most nights, a girl that can't even come in... Of course there are more important things and she'll wear him down, but his general policy of not dating girls who are much younger is a solid one. He's trying to be a good guy. He doesn't know he is in a porny romance story yet. ;) Thank You!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2012 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 4

Poor Spike.. trying to be the nice guy.. and trying to protect his heart..
Buffy.. girl has made her mind up.. Lets see what she wears Saturday..
enjoying. wondering who Spike's father is ?

Author's Response: Without revealing too much, I can tell you that Spike's father's identity will have little to no impact on the story. He is on his own. I'm glad you're enjoying this one. I hope I can keep your interest. :) Thanks!

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