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Reviewer: bikey88chic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

Alone. In a house. Together. Hmmm. And to help in what way? Great chapter!

Author's Response: ;) Thank you! We'll see how it goes!!

Reviewer: riz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

omg! when does she turn 18??!! great confrontation with dru!

Author's Response: Hmm... good question.. I will consider that. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

Great chapter. Very hot and then angsty. I love angst and it will interesting how the rest of night will go.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I wasn't sure about this one, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!! The rest of the night should be very interesting ;)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

I thought you were going to stop them when the person was at the door! Thank you for not doing so. :) I liked the sexual frenzy they were in.

Your Dru's crazy voice was perfect, very hilarious.

I can't wait to see what their night is like; I hope they do, do stuff. ;)

Looking forward to next chapter!!

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you enjoyed the teacher at the door. My original plan was actually to stop them but it just felt like the right time to get things moving along. I'm also happy Dru's crazy voice made sense to people :) Next chapter should be a lot less angsty and more fun and maybe they will do stuff.... ;) we'll see! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: girlie_mel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

Whoa baby!!!

Please please please more

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I will post as soon as I can!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

Wow. Now he's clearly in too deep with Buffy, mostly after she comes to him. But, the story with Dru, and her rambling. Super spooky, and quite well done. I do not know how he will get out of this. I do have one question, though, in the last chapter, Buffy said that she was sixteen. In this chapter, Spike said he married when he was 21, three years from her... which would make her 18. So is she 16, or 18? One makes things a touch more complicated, so would probly be good to pick one. :) Really entranced, especially now that all hell has broken loose, and her burns for Buffy. (Still hung up on that imagery!) Please, Update soon!

Author's Response: The age thing is totally my mess up, thank you for catching it! Buffy is seventeen in the story. I fixed the two remarks about her age. As for the spookiness, I was in an odd mood I guess, but I'm glad you liked the imagery! Thank you for posting!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I wasn't really sure about this chapter, so it's good to know :) I'll post soon.

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