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Reviewer: girlie_mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2012 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter 11: Harsh Light of Day

I have to say I love the dog idea. Don't we all just say stupid things when we panic? lol
Now Dru is gone... ? hmm.. why do I feel we ain't seen the last of her, or why do I also thing she is in fact pregnant and if so is it Spikes?
Can't wait for more. Great job

Author's Response: Hahaha I'm glad everyone liked the dog thing. It was a little random idea I put in there to amuse :) Yes, well, we shall have to see if Dru returns with or without a baby. Thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: riz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 11: Harsh Light of Day

Closer and closer to happy...love the dog idea!

Author's Response: Lol yes, closer but not quite there yet. Thanks, it was just a lame excuse i came up with on the fly.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 11: Harsh Light of Day

I was surprised to see Drusilla go, but hey, that makes more time for Spuffy!

Hopefully Buffy will sneak out soon so she can talk to Spike. He needs her comfort right now.

I can't tell you had a writers block. This chapter was very necessary; reality came crashing down on them because buffys mom came home, and drusilla up and left Spike, I think confusing his emotions a bit. So, this was an important chapter to have.

Update soon, please?

Author's Response: I agree, I think Drusilla was just bringing him down farther and they didn't really have a reason to stay together anymore. I felt that a lot of things in this chapter needed to happen, so I'm glad you felt the same. Spike will need to consider everything and maybe they'll finally have the talk :) I hope to update tomorrow but I'm not sure. I will try!

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