[Report This]Date: 05/10/2012 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
hi, i just read up to chapter 20 on EF! i love it!!! and read dreams there too! love it!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2012 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh yes I like that start. Haven't read a period piece in a long time. Looking forward to more - soon please.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2012 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful premise! Loving the characters and LOVE a period piece!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 04/08/2012 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love insufferable cad William! And fiery Buffy. Girl doesn't know what she's capable of... or capable of enjoying. William has a very piqued curiosity. Hope he decides to "help" her. Update soon!
Author's Response: I have a feeling you will like the next chapter, then ;) Thanks for the feedback!!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2012 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start, can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you!! The new chapter should be up early this week :D
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2012 - 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start, and I love the establishment of their characters. Just one thing: I think you should do more research into your story, because the way they speak and act doesn't exactly scream historical fiction. It's kind of a mishmash between modern and olden times, you know? And seeing as this is set in the 1800s, you should adhere strictly to olden times. Anyway, great start so far and looking forward to more. How often will you be updating?
Author's Response: I'll be updating very regularly. I have most of the story written. Thanks for the feedback!
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