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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2012 - 01:36 am Title: I Knew I Loved You

Love snarky dream Buffy. Hope she's onto something. I do wonder how you manage time travel with the red scum. Interesting property, that. Got to wonder what the story is behind those crazy reds. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BuffyRat! Who knows what weird dimension those Reds are from and what makes mixing their dust with holy water (or is it just salt water that did it, or does it have to be Jedi holy water?) capable of such an awesome feat. Glad you liked snarky-dream-Buffy. My beta said she sounded a lot like snarky-Spike! I think perhaps our couple has been married too long, huh? Naaaa.... that's like too much of a good thing - never happen. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2012 - 12:58 pm Title: I Knew I Loved You

Xander’s brainstorming over Warren and the Bot was wonderful, especially his comment on the Bot’s opinion of Warren’s “danglies” (as Spike would say)!! As usual, Cordeila makes it very, very easy to dislike her; maybe W&H will take care of her…? Loved the conversation between Buffy and her subconscious! Need I say how wonderful the scene was between Buffy and William?! Thanks for the great update, more soon please.
P.S. I’m really excited about the new, related story!


Author's Response: Hi Melly!! Yes, Cordy is always the bit-ca, with a capital 'B'. Maybe W&H will take care of her ... heehee! I loved writing Buffy's subconscious - my beta said Buffy's sub. sounds a lot like snarky Spike. I guess he's really made a deep impression on her! : ) Glad you liked Buffy and William's reconnecting. Ooooo ... the new, related story will be fun ... and full of angst too. It won't be an epic, already have one of those, but it's been fun to work from canon again. You will have to wait for it a bit though ... spoilers. Thanks for reading and always stopping in Melly!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2012 - 06:06 am Title: If I Knew Then

That can't be the end of Bess. The Reds may be powerful, but they just aren't bright enough to win! (Though I do have a can cover that says "Never underestimate the power of stupid people in large groups.") But they can't win! And William has to come back to himself. Slayer blood has to help. Just has to. And really, what is the BuffyBot up to... Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BR!! Oooo ... you are clever! And I totally love that saying - soooo very true! We will find out just exactly what happened there on the ship soon. And William-y Spike ... yes, he will come back to himself, just in time to make things sadder. :( I think we cut back to Sunnydale and the Buffybot after the next chapter (I can't remember for sure when, but I know we do, so don't hold me to that time frame). Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Will have more soon!

Reviewer: lmullins Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2012 - 06:28 pm Title: If I Knew Then

Ok I am done. Angst is one thing but this is just evil. Do not get me wrong you have a great gift and a wonderful talent. But, each chapter makes me more and more depressed. I feel that I must wait for the end and then read backwards. Both Bess and Annie are to much. I pray that Billy and Dani are safe. I hope you now I am all talk. Come Sunday I will be back checking for my fix. Just like with any addiction. Can we have a little happiness, it is a holiday weekend afterall. How many more chapters do you think there will be? You do have an amazing talent.

Author's Response: Oh man - you really scared me!!!!!!!!! How many more chapters ... ummmm ... I have 40 so far, plus about 10 or more of ... uhhh ... well ... never mind that. You almost got me to tell the ending! Bad doggie! That's not nice! I actually haven't quite finished writing, but I'd say all told there will definitely be over 50 chapters. I can tell you there will be smiles later, but there will be more angst before we get there. I'm afraid I don't have anything super happy for this weekend, however there will be a small glimmer of a plan coming up *very* soon. On the bright side, Dani, Billy, and MacKenzie are all FINE. :) Hang in there, there will be happy chapters at some point, I swear. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, even though you almost tricked me into a spoiler and definitely scared me! :)

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2012 - 06:07 pm Title: If I Knew Then

So what? You and your muse woke up this morning and decided to post this update now just so my entire weekend would be ruined?!?!?! Double the Spikes so it’s double the angst for Buffy and I can’t bear to contemplate what’s happening to Bess! Thanks for another gut-wrenching update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Yes, my muse woke up and said, "Time to make them cry again! No happy holidays around 'ere, mate!" Poor Buffy is having to deal with two completely heartbroken Spikes - wow! How much can one woman take? And poor Bess! Oh, I cried so hard all through this chapter - not quite as bad as the Annie asking 'why' chapter, but it most definitely brought lots of tears. I'll try to have more soon ... there will be a small glimmer of hope and an idea for a plan very soon, so maybe that will help salvage the weekend. Of course, there will also be more tears... :( What can I say? My muse is devilishly handsome, but also morbidly evil. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in Melly! Love hearing from U!

Reviewer: lmullins Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2012 - 01:31 pm Title: Reunited

First Annie now Bess. Is it to much to ask that we not be given details on Bess's situation. I am low on medication and do not know if I can handle it. Bess has just grown so much and really needs a break. William is charming but we need Spike to kick some ass. Spike and Buffy need to throw caution to the wind and go get their daugther. As always you amaze me with your writing style. Update soon I am off to get some more meds.

Author's Response: Hi lmullins! Thanks for stopping in! On Bess, I had considered not cutting to her and just leaving that to our imagination, but then I got curious to see how she would handle it, so, sorry to say, we will be checking in on her. I personally was impressed with her fortitude when my muse wrote her predicament, so hopefully you won't need lots of extra meds for it. Surprisingly (or maybe not), the Reds are not as cruel as the Council (LOL!) so no worries about that sort of thing. Will have more soon! Thanks again for stopping in, love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2012 - 12:30 pm Title: Reunited

I’m sure Andrew and your evil muse will be happy to know that while reading the fight scene between Spike and William I pictured them using light sabers! Loved Spike’s reaction upon learning that William dusted Angel! Maybe they will be able to get together for a pint in the future? Not even going to consider answering your question about what more can go wrong, nope, not going to go there thank you very much. I’m just going to plead for them to rescue Bess – like right now!!! Thanks for another wonderful update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Squeeeee! Love that you saw them fighting with light sabers! You know Spike would have to buy anyone that dusts Angel a pint! :) Come to think of it, I think I'm due a few! How many times have I dusted Angel now? :) At least three all told ... maybe more? It's bad when you have to have a scorecard to remember how many times you've dusted Angel in your stories. LOL! sorry to say more will go wrong, but you will get your wish - someone will go to rescue Bess. That could be the start of more things going wrong.... :( Thanks again! Love hearing from you, Melly!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2012 - 12:05 pm Title: Bittersweet Symphony

Really loved Spike in the cabinet with the Star Wars figures! And then to have Buffy call him grumpy bottoms!! I’m sure they must really hate the fact that the “Jedi” keeps saving their behinds – it’d be much easier to take if were actually Luke Skywalker. I hope if and when Spike and William meet it won’t create some kind of horrendous tear in the space/time continuum – may the force be with them! Thanks for another great update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! Glad you liked Spike hiding in the cabinet with the action figures! I don't know *where* Grumpy Bottoms came from - I laughed when Buffy said it! (I know ... I'm so strange - there's this evil muse that lives in my brain and I never know what he'll come out with next!). It is getting a bit worrisome having to be saved by the geek. And Andrew's totally missing the AGE OF THE GEEK, BABY! It's soo sad, he doesn't even know that in another dimension, he'd be cool. Thanks so much for stopping in! Always love hearing from you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2012 - 03:24 am Title: Bittersweet Symphony

Love that Andrew saved the day. Love the arguing between Buffy and that Spike even more. Some things never change. :) And Her Spike found her. Though I must ask one question. This Spike had to evade all the wetness cause it was soaking though his shoes and causing him to smoke. Last I recall, Unexpected Spike didn't have shoes, at all--the boots were dry rotted. How is he all in the holy water and not in possession of smokey feet? Perhaps his lack of knowledge that he's a vampire? Or simply the pull of Avengelyne? And 2 Spikes? That will be interesting, especially if one of them is "William." :) Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BR! Glad you liked Andrew to the rescue (again!) and the bickering between Spike and Buffy. William's feet will be smoking and burning, but with the Gem they will also be healing up (unlike Gift-less!Spike who could risk dusting if he continued slogging through the holy water goo). We'll deal with that in the next chapter when William meets Spike and vice-versa. :) Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2012 - 12:03 pm Title: Regrets

The title of this chapter nearly made me run away screaming but I managed to take a few deep breaths and “soldiered on” as Giles might say. Loved the “Chatty Cathy Dungeon Master” name but how anyone that has to deal with him restrains from slapping him I’ll never understand. I’m always happy when the wanker is dusted – just hope your evil muse doesn’t make it cause problems for them later. Seems like the Reds recognized that Bess is a slayer, at least there’s her mother and two actual Spikes (mmmm two Spikes….) that can hopefully ride to the rescue.

Author's Response: Hi Melly! I will warn you when the angst really amps up again (and it will), Andrew does kinda need to be slapped once in a while. Where's Bad-cop-Anya when you need her? :) Hey, a story where Angel gets dusted TWICE ... ?? My muse is doing cartwheels ... although I'm afraid he may have some more sinister plans for the consequences of that... :O Mmmmmmm .... two Spikes ... dreamy sigh ... :) Thanks Melly! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2012 - 08:01 am Title: Regrets

That is one special sand storm of a pickle you've worked them into. Tiny, slightly bit serves Angel right for goading the poor boy on, but this cannot in any way be good. And even with all of that, how did they snatch Bess? Can't believe that the reds wouldn't have aspired to have a bigger fight than snatching one small girl... Such a quandary. Gotta update soon... someone of them has to make progress!!

Author's Response: It is quite a pickle! Angel just can't keep himself from goading Spike/William - it's like in his blood. Maybe the Reds hoped that Angel would kill Spike .... or maybe they're planning on using Bess as bait. :O Progress will be made soon ... Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2012 - 01:04 am Title: Land of Confusion

I am so happy that Spike is out of the octopus and worried how all of them are going to get home. I love the spin of Andrew's story and Buffy's deciphering abilities which leave me worry about how any of them are going to get home but am looking forward to and I hope you do do it which is the two Spike's meeting.

Author's Response: Hi Blue Eyes! Getting home is a worry, but at least we have Andrew to tell us fairy tales in the meantime! :) The two Spikes will meet ... well, William and Spike will meet, eventually, so one wish granted! :) Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2012 - 06:48 am Title: Land of Confusion

Well, everyone is screwed for the time being, but no one is currently being eaten or digested, so that's of the good. Figured the feeble blond one had some part in the rescue... Loved Buffy's translation of his story, too. Wondering how there going to get out of this one. Update soon!

Author's Response: I like that you can look on the bright side! Congrats for figuring that Andrew would be involved in the rescue! Good on ya! We'll find out if they can get a plan soon ... Thanks so much, BR!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2012 - 06:42 pm Title: Land of Confusion

I love how Buffy figured out the true story of how the “Jedi” rescued Spike!! I refuse to think of how he tried to wake Spike – I simply can’t bear to contemplate that particular scenario. Thanks for the great update, more soon please.

Author's Response: Heehee! Hey Melly! Glad you liked Buffy's skills at unweaving Andrew's tale. Hope you aren't permanently scarred by the thought of Andrew trying to wake Spike up. :) I'll try to have another update by Friday. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2012 - 05:13 am Title: Bad Day

That is a bit unfortunate. Wonder if the vamp trio will have the same fun with leeches like Buffy and the other Spike did? And I do have to wonder who will come to her rescue... Spike isn't the only cow boy at that ranch. (Though he is our favorite.) Also love that Bess may not be all up to date culturally, but the girl still has some snark. Hope they find each other kind of soon... Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BR! We'll soon find out about the leeches ... I'm thinking ... yes. I really love Bess' snark and fire. She is Buffy and Spike's daughter, there is no doubt. :) Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2012 - 01:56 pm Title: Bad Day

I really hope it’s not Rack that saves her – please let Spike show up for the rescue!!! Angel is being the wanker I expected him to be; any chance of him not making it back from this dimension? Thanks for another great chapter, more soon please.

Author's Response: Uht-oh ... no Rack, huh? Errrmmmm ,,, well, uhhh ... we'll see. I can tell you that it will not be our handsome, down-trodden hero, Spike. (that would be too easy) Angel will continue to be a wanker - and our Spike will continue to be William, and he will quite dislike the wanker, so ... you never know about your second wish... He has dusted Angel once before. :O

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2012 - 07:00 pm Title: World Domination

Yes JJ has beyond a doubt earned his Scooby-stripes! Only you and your evil muse could take a character like Warren and make him even more despicable. He sent Buffy through the portal before closing it didn’t he?! Let’s hope she ends up in the same location as Spike and Bess. Thanks for another great chapter, more soon please

Author's Response: I live to make all the villains even worse than Joss did! It definitely is one of my muse's favorite things to do! Yes, he dropped Buffy through the portal and then he closed it - permanently. We'll find out if she, Spike, Bess, and Angel are all in the same place and - if they are, can they find each other there. Thanks Melly, love hearing from you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2012 - 05:12 am Title: World Domination

JJ totally beyond rocked that. He gets scooby and nerd stripes for that. And I loved Data. Now, I have to wonder what exactly Warren was able to do to make this happen. Guess it makes sense that his magic works on the octopus, cause they're from the same place, but by that logic, shouldn't it not work on the rest of them? Curiouser and curiouser. Update soon!

Author's Response: Our two little Jedi's really rock the nerd stuff! :) JJ is a sweetie pie and knows his scifi probably as well a Billy does. Not sure that Warren actually had anything to do with the octopus - for sure he grabbed Buffy - the other was probably just a happy (for him) coincidence. Perhaps when Willow gets back she'll have a theory. Thanks for reading and always stopping in, BR!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 - 04:25 am Title: Run

I just knew you couldn't possibly end this chapter with a rescue. Already accomplished too much. :) Given that I'm not quite sure what's happening, I'm not so agitated that it'll keep me up tonight. :) Hope it's just a little wrinkle, but I'm not gonna hold my breath. Gotta say, this group of vamps does not have the best track record with oceans. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi BR! LOL! No, can't have too much go 'right' at one time! That wouldn't be any fun! I think our heroes should stock up on rabbit's feet or four-leaf clovers or something! They need a break! Unfortunately, they won't be getting it anytime soon ... :( Thanks, BR!!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 - 01:10 am Title: Run

Sorry for the many, many reviews all similar but I made an effort to give you one and it kept saying that the code was typed incorrectly so I would try it again. As you can see I was determined.

Author's Response: You were determined!! Good on ya! :) Not sure if you know, but if you log in to the site, you don't have to enter that annoying code when you leave a review. I NEVER can get those codes right ... They are very frustrating!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 - 01:06 am Title: Run

What was that!!! Is Bess now in danger will she face some life altering life ending situation? Is nobody safe? Is no dimension safe? Stay tune.

Author's Response: I can say without hesitancy, that no one is safe in this world. We'll find out what happened soon.Same Bat time, same Bat Channel! :)

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 - 01:05 am Title: Run

What was that!!!! Is Bess now in danger is this going to be some life altering or life ending situation. Is nobody safe? Is no dimension safe? Stay tune.

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 - 01:04 am Title: Run

What was that!!!! Is Bess no in jeopary to face some life altering or life ending changes. Is nobody safe? Is no dimension safe? Stay tune.

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 - 01:03 am Title: Run

What was that!!!! Is Bess due for some horrible life altering or ending situation. Is nobody safe? Is no dimension safe? Stay tune.

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2012 - 07:52 pm Title: Run

Love, love, love that Angelpie helped to bring her back! Is this kitty by any chance a reincarnation of Wanda?! I hope that feeling of being flushed down a toilet doesn’t mean they have been either swallowed by the octopus or sent back with it to its original dimension. If so, perhaps they will be sent to an earlier time and they can be the ones to save Buffy and their Buffy won’t have to time travel. But then that means Spike would probably be with them… Grrr Argh!!! Thanks for another great chapter, more soon please.

Author's Response: Angelpie is Wanda's 'emissary' ... or so she said when she, Bess, and Angelpie met in Philly a while back. So, yeah, there's a bit of guardian angel in Angelpie. I'm actually working (slowly) on a story from Angelpie's POV, but not sure when it will be done. That will answer a few more questions about our little kitty's life. Oh my - what does that feeling of being flushed mean?? We'll find out pretty soon. You have some great ideas about that and I can tell you that one of your theories is right - but I won't tell you which one. I'm mean - sorry. Thanks so much for reading and sticking with me through all this angst! {hugs} -p4s

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