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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2014 - 03:19 pm Title: Daddy

Still miss this fic finish it please !😊

Reviewer: Miranda Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2013 - 03:00 am Title: Whiskey.

Seriously hope you finish this it's good

Reviewer: andyalli Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2013 - 07:51 pm Title: Daddy

update please... i definitely love your story!!

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2013 - 10:50 am Title: Daddy

Ya just got back from holiday an seen this great work carnt wait to see more

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2013 - 04:51 am Title: Daddy

I really, really like this story. I love that even though he's 'bad', you still root for the love story between Spike and Buffy, and you kind of end up cheering her on for doing things wickedly :)

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2013 - 09:25 pm Title: Daddy

Loved the chapter and where your taking it! More please!

Reviewer: bbe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2013 - 01:49 pm Title: Daddy

Do you ever sleep? Between school, writing, and being a cheerleader for my muse, where do you find the time? Great update! Buffy's is an apple not too far from the proverbial tree, huh? Looking forward to how Spike handles that when he finds out.

Reviewer: LoveNaughtyBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2013 - 02:48 am Title: Daddy

I absolutely LOVE where you're taking it and I foresee some 'cold' revelations for Buffy with the coming chapters. I love the glimpses of a not so nice Buffy. I wish there were more fics that had that. Can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2013 - 12:41 am Title: Daddy

Great chapter!!!! Like that Spike has feels for Buffy.

Author's Response: Thank u so much, anonymous reviewer. I appreciate u stopping in.

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2013 - 05:09 pm Title: Daddy

Yay. I am so excited you added a new chappie. A very enjoyable one too.
Also I really liked the daddy kink and hope to see it again in the story or even a mention of it, maybe Buffy saying something like 'Lets go home Daddy!' Or when / if he gets mad 'I'm sorry Daddy' then I guess we could draw conclusions to where their going next and either you mention that encounter or not because with mentioning it you wont necessarily have to thereby not having a repeat, even if it is Super Hot!!!! Ooh or if you do mention it take it up a notch adding spanking? lol guess I liked this particular kink huh?
Great job as usual baby and I cannot wait to see more from you for any of your fantastic stories.

Author's Response: HAHA. Daddy kink is my favorite. I will add more. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I'm focusing a lot on school right now because it's almost finished. My updates will be more frequent starting in March. Thanks as always for stopping in, Mel. xx

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2013 - 09:55 pm Title: Enormous.

Update plz :-) ??

Author's Response: You always manage to motivate me. Thanks, nikki.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2013 - 10:40 pm Title: Enormous.

Looks like Spike was able to pull off finding a place for Buffy to stay while he went in the meeting. Loved it!

Author's Response: thanks so much, photonut!!

Reviewer: serena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2012 - 02:42 pm Title: Enormous.

Liked it! I'm wondering though why Ethan didn't say 'while she waits for my son'. Is there a special reason why Buffy can't know they're father and son?
Hope you update soon

Author's Response: Hey, serena! Thanks for stopping in. I'm so glad to hear you're liking the story. It was a bit ago so maybe you don't remember: Spike and Ethan don't like the public to know they're related. Rupert Giles is Spike's "surrogate father" Thanks much for reading and letting me know your thoughts!

Author's Response: And I hope to update soon, too!

Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2012 - 10:18 am Title: Enormous.

I've been reading this story for a while and I'm not sure about it.
All you write about Spike's thougths are about breaking Buffy in, getting her to have sex with him and suddenly he talks about love (pet to l-...)?
And first Buffy is this shy girl, hesitant to have sex with Spike and all of a sudden after one night of sex, she's this sexcraved maniac...
She just doesn't seem to same person that you write about in the first couple of chapters.
I'm not saying I dislike this story, but I feel that you're trying to 'speed' through this story in stead of making it a believable one. This feeling is strenghtened by you practically begging for reviews before and after every chapter. It makes me feels as if you only really care about people reviewing and not about writing a good story.

Author's Response: I'm going to respond to this in order of your comments. Firstly: thanks for reading. Secondly: that is not all I write of Spike's thoughts. He has mentioned that he finds her beautiful and 'there's something about her' Lets not forget that Spike has been a criminal with his father for years now and he has been a womanizer for years. Those thoughts of 'breaking her in and wanting to have sex' are natural thoughts. He's a bad guy. But as the chapters go on..his thoughts become less demeaning. I've always believed that Spike had love at first sight for Buffy. He didn't know it in canon and he didn't know it in this story. Thirdly: Buffy is shy with Spike. She is the head of the cheerleading squad and popular at school...she is not shy outside of him. And if Spike wanted to screw me, sorry, but I would be all over that. She has lost her virginity and loves the feel of it. Who doesn't? I will get back to her going to school and talking with friends. Her bubbly personality has not left at all. Fourthly: And this also goes with the prior; It has been Friday for at least eight chapters now. I'm not rushing anything. Again, she lost her virginity to...c'mon it's Spike!....and she wants more. So, no I'm not speeding through anything. If I was then I would start the next chapter saying, 'two months later.' The only thing I didn't like about your feedback is the review comment. I thought it was uncalled for. Everything else you noted for considered constructive, and I hope that's how you meant it. An author writes not only to put it out there but to get the feedback, the critisism, the praise. I don't write for myself. If I did then I would never post. I have never read a story where an author doesn't ask for reviews or use the term 'beg'. I'm not literally groveling at the feet of my readers. I'm just saying it in a teasing fasion. I do have a real life. I'm not sitting at my computer waiting for reviews so I can survive. I do care about my story. I enjoy writing this story. I have never claimed to be among the great authors of Spuffy. I just write for fun and because it makes me happy. Everyday more people are favoriting the story, so there are people that do like it and enjoy where it's going. Obviously there are other people like you that feel the same. But if they don't let me know and only fester about it and read on...its not going ot change the story. Again, I need things pointed out to know. I'm not a mind reader. Continue reading or not. Thanks.

Author's Response: I really hope you read that how I intended it. I appreciated your feedback and I was only responding.

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 01:07 pm Title: Enormous.

I really enjoyed this chapter. To me it showed more of Spike, more of the relationship. That she is more to him. I means sure he wants to corrupt her and he is doing a fantastic job so far, but we also see him wanting it to be just that...More.
Fantastic work

Author's Response: Thank you much, darling dear. Spike is developing feelings for her but it is a strange feeling for him. He's not sure of what it means. There was no Drusilla for him in this story. He's never felt love beyond that for his father. He does know that he wants to keep her aroun when all possible. Another reviewer agreed with your suggestion of the threesome with two guys and how she finds how. I may put my own twist to that...but I will give you a shout out for the inspiration! That won't be for a bit though. xx

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 01:04 pm Title: Sphincter.

Whoa, not much to say but great job looking forward to more soon.

Author's Response: You not having much to say? I find that hard to believe. LOL. Hope you had a wondeful Christmas xx

Reviewer: Stetson74 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 08:02 am Title: Enormous.

Am loving this story and can't wait for the next installment, please don't make Buffy too much of a bad girl, but please continue to show Spike's softer side - now he and Buffy have got this far, I hope that he's not going to cheat on her. I'm so pleased that this wasn't the end! Thank you.

Author's Response: My biggest fear is that you, and others will stop reading this story soon. My plan all along has been to corrupt Buffy and make her into a...well, very bad girl. I can only hope that you'll stick through it with me. I appreciate you reading and stopping in to leave me a review. I hope I can keep your interest and you will enjoy the Buffy that is to come. I go where my muse takes me... Thanks so much, stetson74!

Author's Response: Oh and no, Spike will not be sleeping with other least not without Buffy right there.

Reviewer: basket_case1880 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 01:34 am Title: Enormous.

Yet another great chapter. Can't wait for the daddy kink.
Just a few corrections/suggestions:

"However, the more passionately Spike talked of the music and band she enjoyed it; it was fun, exhilarating." After "band" include "the more".

"Buffy’s instinct was to move away because she thought the act was too personal to be seen my strangers, but she fought against it." The word "my" should read "by".

So glad there are more out there who love The Clash, my fave song is cliched (I know) but London's Calling is a classic.
Laura xx.

Author's Response: Thank you for being so wonderful to me. I will make the changes. Thanks for understanding that I'm very impulsive, as well. :-D London Calling is a classic! Clash is my favorite band.

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2012 - 09:51 pm Title: Enormous.

I feel spoilt keep up the Gud work :)

Author's Response: You've been a loyal reader and reviewer, nikki. I'm glad I could make you feel spoiled.

Reviewer: Meaghen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2012 - 08:46 pm Title: Enormous.

You've got me addicted! I'd wait forever if I had to! Can't wait to see what happens with her Mom or when she finally finds out what Spike really does. Great. :)

Author's Response: Hey, meaghen! Thanks for stopping in. That's very sweet of you to say. She'll face her mother probably in the next chapter. And she will find out about Spike shortly. The story is going to take a dark turn so hopefully you will continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2012 - 08:13 pm Title: Sphincter.

Wonder how Ethan will react! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: thanks photo! I have his reaction in the next chapter I just updated. He loves his son so he's only a bit pissed. I don't have Buffy going into the meeting. She can't find out about that part of Spike's life just yet.

Reviewer: basket_case1880 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2012 - 05:21 pm Title: Sphincter.

Great chapter, totally loved it. Just one tiny correction to be noted. In the sentence "She had a silly grin on as she turned onto her back to look at her punk man." it would make more sense if you include on her face after "silly grin".
Laura xx.

Author's Response: You're so good to me. I meant to send you the chapter but my aunt came over. Writing spuffy is a secret of mine. Sh. :-) I will note you in my authors notes. Thanks, sweetie!

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2012 - 05:15 pm Title: Sphincter.

Amazing again want to jus read the whole story :-)

Author's Response: I appreciat you so much, always letting me know what you think. If I had the whole story written I would for sure send it to you! Glad you liked it. I hope to update on Saturday. Thanks, hon.

Reviewer: Lucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2012 - 03:03 pm Title: Fucking II

It was such a good chapter ! And I like Melissa's idea about a threesome with 2 guys and Spike being too possessive and killing the extra guy. That can be the way buffy discovers that spike is really bad, and that she is too. what do you think ?

Author's Response: Haha! Ok! Maybe I will do the two guys things lol. Thanks so much for reviewing, sweets.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2012 - 11:15 pm Title: Fucking II

Can't wait to see what happens when Buffy has to face her Mother. Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for stopping in, photo! She will be facing her mother shortly. Glad you liked it.

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