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Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2012 - 05:18 am Title: Joyce II

Hello again darling
what I said keep your chin up and remember to keep smiling. :-)
As you can all see from the reviews left there are so many of us that adore your story and would be shattered for it to be left incomplete due to another persons view point.
Now on to this chapter...
Joyce has just supplied the ultimate in 'forbidden fruit' being told no and it's for your own good at 16 without explanation is a neon flashing light with stars and rainbows shooting all over the place.
ooh ooh I cannot wait for more.
Sorry for short review but I am desperate to get to the next chapter.
Thank you for releasing two.
YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
HUGS
x

Author's Response: Hey, sweetie. Thanks so much for all of the encouragement! I was so happy that so many readers came through for me. Xx

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 06:52 pm Title: Joyce II

To short need more love seein this updated great fix keep goin :-)

Author's Response: Next chapter has been sent to my beta. 1200 words. :-) It'll be updated soon. Thanks for your reviews, Nikki.

Reviewer: Lambean Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 05:34 pm Title: Joyce II

Oh no Joyce. By forbidding Buffy to see him without explaining why is gonna make him irresistible to a teenage girl. Or an adult woman for that matter because who in World really wants to be told what to do or who to see just because someone else says so..Good job!


Author's Response: I thought about Joyce letting Buffy know what was said, but I would think it would be awkward for her. I'm not sure though because I don't have children. Anyway, it helped for what I want with the plot. She has made her want Spike even more. Thanks again, Lambean.

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 05:22 pm Title: Joyce II

I really like the story so don't let anything ruin your confidence. Please continue :) I'll be waiting!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for stopping in, Laura. You and others have helped the muse so much. My next chapter is already to my beta.

Reviewer: Meaghen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 04:58 pm Title: Joyce II

I agree with everyone else. I don't usually leave reviews because I get so into reading the stories that I just hop from one story to another story. But here's a review for ya, your story is great. I love seeing this type of Spike all badass but you know somewhere deep inside him he's actually liking this sweet, innocent girl and it's probably not just because he wants to get into her pants, but of course that's all he thinks it is for now. Don't let mean or bad reviews deter you from writing your story. This is YOUR story, nobody elses, write it how YOU want. I check back everyday to look for an update from you, I think it's great. A bunch of other people think it's great, so who cares what someone else says because there are people out there who love it. This chapter was a little short for my liking, but I can see why it would be if you lost some of your spark from some mean review. Believe in yourself and the reviews from people who like the story, keep going, you're amazing. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! This review was very insipring to read. Really. Thank you so so much, Meaghen.

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 04:50 pm Title: Joyce II

I love this story. Don't let people get you down. Please keep updating. Pretty please?

Author's Response: Thank you, Rachel. My muse has definitely gotten the boost it needed. Thanks to you and others. My next chapter is already sent to my beta.

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 03:23 pm Title: Joyce II

What made this PM kill your muse?

This is one of my fave stories. I check hoping it's updated every day.

I like that Buffy is going back to see Spike at Willies.

Author's Response: Jaime! Thanks so much for being a constant reviewer. The email was just really harsh. I am a new writer and my confidence is easily shattered. Thanks to you ,and others, I have brushed it off. The next chapter is already off to my beta. I'm so flattered that you check everyday for an update and it's one of your favorites! I can't promise everyday, but I'm hoping to update once a week. Next chapter will be up, though, as soon as I get it back from beta.

Reviewer: bbe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 02:00 pm Title: Joyce II

I was so preachy standing on my soapbox that I forgot to comment on the chapter. Taking the whole 'it's my way or the highway' with someone never works. Joyce is just pushing Buffy into Spike's arms. Not good (well, in her perspective)

Author's Response: Exactly. Buffy is a teenager and it's silly for Joyce to think that her lecture would get through to her. Thanks so much, bbe!!

Reviewer: Merryreader Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 02:00 pm Title: Joyce II

I'm interested to know where you are going with this story. Please remember that you won't make everyone happy, even when writing. When I discovered fan fiction a couple of years ago, I was amazed at the talent of most writers. Keep up the good work! If you still need a beta, I would be willing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragment, merryreader. I will continue to write. My muse is doing much better with the help of you and others. And thank you, but I have a beta. Really appreciate the offer though.

Reviewer: bbe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 01:53 pm Title: Joyce II

(A PM--private message?) Sweetie, don't let anyone deter you. I know it can be hard, every writer has their ups and downs. (Not making this about me, but I've had many myself.) If you enjoy writing, then write. Don't do it for reviews, or for others' approval, do it for you. Not everyone will enjoy your writing or the direction you are taking in a story, but for every one of those readers there are a dozen who are loving what you are doing. I'm sorry that someone, instead of just stop reading, decided they needed to critize and or insult you or your story. Don't let them get to you. I for one am enjoying your story. Keep writing!!! *big huggers* BBE

Author's Response: I get butterflies at the thought of you reading and enjoying my story. Seriously. You must know how much I adore you and your writing and it just--it's amazing to me that you like something of mine. I just sent the next chapter to my beta. :-) Thanks, BBE!

Reviewer: basket_case1880 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 01:34 pm Title: Joyce II

Don't let the bad reviews get you down. This story has been awesome so far and by the sounds of it, things are about to get better.
I let a couple of bad reviews get to me and I've only just got back into writing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, basketcase. I appreciate all of your help and encouragment.

Reviewer: Andrea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 12:42 pm Title: Joyce II

That´s really quite different story.... I was surprised by Spike´s words to Joyce. That´s gonna be difficult. Ican´t wait for another chapter. Please, go on.

Author's Response: Thanks, Andrea. I didn't want the typical Spike and Joyce relationship. He didn't grow up with a loving Mother like William in the show did. So, that changed him. I'm started on the next chapter already. Update will be soon. Hope to talk to you again.

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2012 - 12:30 pm Title: Joyce II

I am really enjoying this story. It's a different view of Spike & Buffy and I' m really waiting to see if she changes him, or if he crupts her...maybe a bit of both. Tell the muse to fight back. Don't let one bad apple ruin the story for the rest of us.....we're waiting.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, crazylife. My muse is fighting! I'm already started on the next chapter. appreciate you letting me know you're enjoying. Hope to talk to you next time.

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