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Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2013 - 09:55 pm Title: Enormous.

Update plz :-) ??

Author's Response: You always manage to motivate me. Thanks, nikki.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2013 - 10:40 pm Title: Enormous.

Looks like Spike was able to pull off finding a place for Buffy to stay while he went in the meeting. Loved it!

Author's Response: thanks so much, photonut!!

Reviewer: serena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2012 - 02:42 pm Title: Enormous.

Liked it! I'm wondering though why Ethan didn't say 'while she waits for my son'. Is there a special reason why Buffy can't know they're father and son?
Hope you update soon

Author's Response: Hey, serena! Thanks for stopping in. I'm so glad to hear you're liking the story. It was a bit ago so maybe you don't remember: Spike and Ethan don't like the public to know they're related. Rupert Giles is Spike's "surrogate father" Thanks much for reading and letting me know your thoughts!

Author's Response: And I hope to update soon, too!

Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2012 - 10:18 am Title: Enormous.

I've been reading this story for a while and I'm not sure about it.
All you write about Spike's thougths are about breaking Buffy in, getting her to have sex with him and suddenly he talks about love (pet to l-...)?
And first Buffy is this shy girl, hesitant to have sex with Spike and all of a sudden after one night of sex, she's this sexcraved maniac...
She just doesn't seem to same person that you write about in the first couple of chapters.
I'm not saying I dislike this story, but I feel that you're trying to 'speed' through this story in stead of making it a believable one. This feeling is strenghtened by you practically begging for reviews before and after every chapter. It makes me feels as if you only really care about people reviewing and not about writing a good story.


Author's Response: I'm going to respond to this in order of your comments. Firstly: thanks for reading. Secondly: that is not all I write of Spike's thoughts. He has mentioned that he finds her beautiful and 'there's something about her' Lets not forget that Spike has been a criminal with his father for years now and he has been a womanizer for years. Those thoughts of 'breaking her in and wanting to have sex' are natural thoughts. He's a bad guy. But as the chapters go on..his thoughts become less demeaning. I've always believed that Spike had love at first sight for Buffy. He didn't know it in canon and he didn't know it in this story. Thirdly: Buffy is shy with Spike. She is the head of the cheerleading squad and popular at school...she is not shy outside of him. And if Spike wanted to screw me, sorry, but I would be all over that. She has lost her virginity and loves the feel of it. Who doesn't? I will get back to her going to school and talking with friends. Her bubbly personality has not left at all. Fourthly: And this also goes with the prior; It has been Friday for at least eight chapters now. I'm not rushing anything. Again, she lost her virginity to...c'mon it's Spike!....and she wants more. So, no I'm not speeding through anything. If I was then I would start the next chapter saying, 'two months later.' The only thing I didn't like about your feedback is the review comment. I thought it was uncalled for. Everything else you noted for considered constructive, and I hope that's how you meant it. An author writes not only to put it out there but to get the feedback, the critisism, the praise. I don't write for myself. If I did then I would never post. I have never read a story where an author doesn't ask for reviews or use the term 'beg'. I'm not literally groveling at the feet of my readers. I'm just saying it in a teasing fasion. I do have a real life. I'm not sitting at my computer waiting for reviews so I can survive. I do care about my story. I enjoy writing this story. I have never claimed to be among the great authors of Spuffy. I just write for fun and because it makes me happy. Everyday more people are favoriting the story, so there are people that do like it and enjoy where it's going. Obviously there are other people like you that feel the same. But if they don't let me know and only fester about it and read on...its not going ot change the story. Again, I need things pointed out to know. I'm not a mind reader. Continue reading or not. Thanks.

Author's Response: I really hope you read that how I intended it. I appreciated your feedback and I was only responding.

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 01:07 pm Title: Enormous.

I really enjoyed this chapter. To me it showed more of Spike, more of the relationship. That she is more to him. I means sure he wants to corrupt her and he is doing a fantastic job so far, but we also see him wanting it to be just that...More.
Fantastic work

Author's Response: Thank you much, darling dear. Spike is developing feelings for her but it is a strange feeling for him. He's not sure of what it means. There was no Drusilla for him in this story. He's never felt love beyond that for his father. He does know that he wants to keep her aroun when all possible. Another reviewer agreed with your suggestion of the threesome with two guys and how she finds how. I may put my own twist to that...but I will give you a shout out for the inspiration! That won't be for a bit though. xx

Reviewer: Stetson74 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 08:02 am Title: Enormous.

Am loving this story and can't wait for the next installment, please don't make Buffy too much of a bad girl, but please continue to show Spike's softer side - now he and Buffy have got this far, I hope that he's not going to cheat on her. I'm so pleased that this wasn't the end! Thank you.

Author's Response: My biggest fear is that you, and others will stop reading this story soon. My plan all along has been to corrupt Buffy and make her into a...well, very bad girl. I can only hope that you'll stick through it with me. I appreciate you reading and stopping in to leave me a review. I hope I can keep your interest and you will enjoy the Buffy that is to come. I go where my muse takes me... Thanks so much, stetson74!

Author's Response: Oh and no, Spike will not be sleeping with other women...at least not without Buffy right there.

Reviewer: basket_case1880 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 01:34 am Title: Enormous.

Yet another great chapter. Can't wait for the daddy kink.
Just a few corrections/suggestions:

"However, the more passionately Spike talked of the music and band she enjoyed it; it was fun, exhilarating." After "band" include "the more".

"Buffy’s instinct was to move away because she thought the act was too personal to be seen my strangers, but she fought against it." The word "my" should read "by".

So glad there are more out there who love The Clash, my fave song is cliched (I know) but London's Calling is a classic.
Laura xx.

Author's Response: Thank you for being so wonderful to me. I will make the changes. Thanks for understanding that I'm very impulsive, as well. :-D London Calling is a classic! Clash is my favorite band.

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2012 - 09:51 pm Title: Enormous.

I feel spoilt keep up the Gud work :)

Author's Response: You've been a loyal reader and reviewer, nikki. I'm glad I could make you feel spoiled.

Reviewer: Meaghen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2012 - 08:46 pm Title: Enormous.

You've got me addicted! I'd wait forever if I had to! Can't wait to see what happens with her Mom or when she finally finds out what Spike really does. Great. :)

Author's Response: Hey, meaghen! Thanks for stopping in. That's very sweet of you to say. She'll face her mother probably in the next chapter. And she will find out about Spike shortly. The story is going to take a dark turn so hopefully you will continue to enjoy!

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