Date: 11/03/2012 - 05:38 pm Title: Mother May I
The intro to Dawn was nice. They don't seem to get along so I would like to read more about that. Buffy's father must have passed instead of her mother.
Author's Response: You would be correct, I mentioned briefly that her father passed in Chapter 5 at the very beginning, when Spikes asking her about her mom. I will get into that a little more as there bond gets stronger. As far as Dawn, for once I don't want her to be the annoying kid sister. I have a lot of great plans for dawn in my story!
(: Thanks for your review! Cant wait to see how you like whats coming next!
Date: 11/01/2012 - 12:51 pm Title: Mother May I
I'd leave him stunned, and trying to hide his libido....at least that would make it more realistic when it comes to highschool boys. Just saying!
Author's Response: oh he will be stunned and hard! (:
Im really excited about this next chapter. It'll be the start of a "friendship"