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Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2014 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Augh! I love this story so much! It's pitiful how I stalk updates. Love the claiming...love this Buffy and Spike. Love.



Author's Response: Yay! So glad to hear that, thank you for reviewing! Will update again asap

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2014 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

There isn't a thing about this I don't love love. I get so excited for updates. I love how Buffy, Spike, and the guys' little family. I love the guys' increasing protectivness and love for Buffy. I love Buffy and Spike's relationship, and now the angst is external rather than internal between them.

It's perfect. So perfect, I'm reluctant to beg for quicker updates because it's worth it. And yet... ;)



Author's Response: I will try my hardest to update quicker, thank you SO SO much for putting up with the late updates already. I'm so happy you like this fic, and thank you double for the review and for reading! Will update soon!

Reviewer: Merryreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 - 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Another great chapter, Thought about another reviewer's comment about Buffy "becoming" the Slayer which would certainly work into the Flora plot and provide another conflict as she deals with her relationship with Spike and "Chosen" duties, but I wonder more about the story if she remains human..... Sorry, just my musing; guess I will find out...

Author's Response: Such good musings! :) I'm glad the story has interested you and I thank you so much for reading. As for the slayer plot idea, I believe I answered the question as to whether or not Buffy would be called, for the reviewer who liked said idea. As much as Slayer-Buffy kicks ass, in this fic she will remain human. I love to write human her because it helps highlight her character in different ways than just the supernaturally superior.

Reviewer: Merry reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2013 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Still loving this story!  Curious to see the upcoming confrontation between Flora and Spike/ Buffy entourage....



Author's Response: Glad you hear it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: Merryreader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2013 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

I love this story and wait on tenterhooks for updates... Keep up the good work

Author's Response: That is so sweet, I'm thrilled to know you love this fic. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2013 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

I really like this story idea and the writing. But I haven't been able to read past the first couple of chapters because I can't get past the dialect. I'm from the South, and even for Alabama it's just a bit too much for modern day and really distracts from the story.

Author's Response: I'll try and work on the dialect, thank you for the advice. :)

Reviewer: Lambean Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2012 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

My gosh, you are such a good writer! You already had me shedding a few tears. Your descriptions are so vivid that I can "see" into these characters and Buffy's personality. Wow. Keep it up

Reviewer: Embers and Flame Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2012 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Nice start. I'm intrigued. Please continue soon.

Reviewer: lmullins Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2012 - 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

I enjoyed the start of this story. Love the relationship between Buffy and her Grandma. I am looking forward to learning Buffy's back story and meeting Spike.

Reviewer: andyalli Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2012 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Hiiiii.
The first chapter and I liked it.
can't wait to see what happens next...

Author's Response: Yaayy!! Thank you!!

Reviewer: honest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2012 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

This chapter was difficult to get through. It was jarring to read multiple times "the girl", especially after you've already introduced "the girl' as Buffy in the first paragraph. The writing would flow much smoother if you use just her name or pronouns.

Author's Response: Alright I will try that. Thank you!

Reviewer: Eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2012 - 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Nice start I already love Grams and can't wait to see how you bring Spike into the story.

Author's Response: Thanks! Spike will appear soon :)

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