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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2013 - 10:27 am Title: Chapter 19

Loved this chapter! Love your story! Their "reunion" was so beautiful and intense. And it's good to see Buffy and Anya gaining more understanding for one another.
Please keep it up. Can't wait for the new chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I had some trouble writing their reunion. I didn't want it to seem like it happened for the wrong reasons. New chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2013 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter 18

Loved how supportive Anya was. Especially loved the scene where buffy called spike to come to bed! Story is moving along so nicely.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like Anya. She's trying to be a better friend.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2013 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 17

Just now reading. Liked this chapter. I liked xander and anyas day trip. It was a nice look into their relationship.

Author's Response: THanks! Glad you like it.

Reviewer: emokitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 18

i lovvvvveeeee this story. i hope that Spike ... William doesn't lose Buffy. i would cry. i love buffy !! loved this chapter, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Yayy!!!! So good to hear. My muse is jumping up and down for joy. You'll just have to keep reading to find out what happens to Buffy ;)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 18

I am sorry I have not reviewed. I am enjoying your story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. It's nice to know you're reading and I'm glad to hear you like it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 18

I'm somewhat happier with Anya but I think since Xander can see how sick Buffy is he should be considerate enough to say they need to be staying in a hotel. He knows they are unwanted house guests yet they still barged in and now they are talking about having a celebration?! Go home and celebrate you future, don't stay and do so in front of someone that may not have a future of her own. I can’t believe Will thinks going out to celebrate the next night is a good idea, regardless of him planning on just drinking water. I know Xander and Anya haven’t been told she has breast cancer but they have noticed how ill she is and they can see she no longer has any hair – that should tell them what’s wrong. And even if they knew for sure she was cured she's still not feeling well enough for them to be there. Will may not be able to make them leave town but couldn’t he at least kick them out of the house?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know what you think. Reviews like yours help me a lot in the writing process. Yes Xander is being incredibly selfish. He's very hurt about the way Buffy has treated their friendship and isn't thinking about the reasons for her behavior. This is something that will be addressed soon. William thinks Buffy can benefit from a night out. I think I should have made that point a little clearer. As for the hotel thing..... Well that would make things way too simple wouldn't it? ;) I'm glad I could make Anya a little more tolerable. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 04:57 am Title: Chapter 18

Like it

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2013 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 17

As I said before, great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2013 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter 16

I am so glad Spike finally told Anya to watch her mouth about what she says about Buffy. I wish he had made them leave though, or at least made Anya leave. I can’t believe even after seeing and learning how sick Buffy is she was still calling her a bitch. Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2013 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 16

I liked the update. I think Spike handled things well. Buffy had every right to be upset with xander and anya being there. I do think Anya's bluntness was borderline unnecessary at times...sometimes way too harsh. Maybe toning it down just a bit would be better? Thanks for another good update. I look forward to reading how Buffy acts in the morning with the new house guests.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. You're not the only one to mention Anya might be coming on too strong. This will be the last chapter where she will be so catty. She'll understand why Buffy's the way she is soon. Thanks for your input :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2013 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 15

Sorry I haven't reviewed before now. I've seen you grow as a writer in leaps and bounds since the first chapter. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2013 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 15

I don’t like Anya is this story so I wish that Spike had told Anyanka to keep her mouth shut because he will no longer tolerate her criticism of Buffy. I wish he had told her that he’s not Xander and will no longer put up with her attitude and comments concerning Buffy; he should have told her it doesn’t matter what she thinks she knows or why she’s doing it, he simply will not tolerate it any longer. Since she and Xander are practically in Camden it’s too late for that so I guess my wish now would be for her to feel unbearable quilt and remorse when she learns of Buffy’s condition and then slink back home with her head down and her tail between her legs.

Author's Response: I appreciate your opinion and am glad you let me know. I have plans for Anya and trust me she will grow as a character. While she is impulsive and doesn't think before she speaks, Spike sees that she's trying to protect him because he is her friend even if she's not going about it the right way. I do hope you like the story and the other characters if not Anya. Thanks for you review!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2013 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 15

This was an excellent update. I love how their relationship is growing. Looking forward to having Anya and Xander thrown in the mix. Buffy will get sick with the amount of chemo she will be having. I'm anxious to read how Spike will handle that.

Author's Response: Thanks for your Reviews. You're the best! It's going to get fun when Xander and Anya get there. Lots of I ferreting stuff rolling around in my head. I just wish I could figure out how to get it down on paper.

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 14

I'm still with you! Glad that Buffy is finally letting the walls come down a bit. Looking forward to them helping each other. Buffy could help Spike with his AA meetings and Spike with her chemo!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

Loved it. It's good to see them getting closer. Wonder what will happen when Xander and Anya show up. :-)

Author's Response: THanks! It's going to be an interesting reunion for Buffy.

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 14

I’ve been a bad, rude fan by not reviewing this story. It’s breaking my heart and I’m frankly terrified of how it may end but I do love it and I thank you for sharing it with us. Looking forward to your next update and I promise I’ll be better about reviewing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad i could get you emotionaly involved in the story.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 14

Love your story. Did Xander and Anya get lost?

Author's Response: Thanks! They're not lost. Anya's making him stop for sightseeing. They're in Kansas.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 14

Did you know Maine has a desert? I bet Anya would have a lot of sarcastic things to say about that! They let you into an area where you can dig for gems...they're all fake, of course. Can you just imagine what she'd say about that? hehe

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 14

By the way, where is this twine ball? Sounds like something I'd want to see.

Author's Response: The Twine ball is in Cawker City, Kansas. Anya keeps making him stop to sightsee by telling him she needed to use the bathroom. She knows he'd say no otherwise.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 14

Can we get a sneak peak into the wank session. Pretty please?

Author's Response: You just might ;)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2012 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 14

Wow. That was so emotional. You always manage to make me tear up. I hope your reviews get better. This is such an original story and it deserves respect. Most people just think the writer will write and write with no encouragment...it baffles me. I will review numerous times a day if it keeps your muse happy.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it and that you understand what i'm saying :)I love reviews!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2012 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 13

I love where the story is going. I really like the addition of Tara. I'm sure that Spike and Buffy will make up soon.

Reviewer: Aly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2012 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 13

I really love this story.
Somehow I knew the shrink would be Tara :-) She's just the type.
I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. I think Tara is perfect. Very understanding and she doesn't judge.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2012 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 12

I loved the Xander and Anya scene! Buffy shaving her head and Spike reassuring her after was so emotional. I teared up....but then you has flashback smut and made my sad mood all better!

Author's Response: Glad you like it! I'm trying to develop Xander and Anya a little more.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2012 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 11

That dream was so harsh. Good job on xander for remembering the town. I haven't forgotten you. I will hopefully have time to reply to your request tonight.

Really good chapter.

Author's Response: I just wanted to show why she's so afraid of opening up again. Thanks for helping me out with those places.

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