lovely description of their future lives and relationship and how the name was chosen. It's a nice fit with the outstanding East of Eden and the disliked and harshly judge son.

Brilliant. Love the idea of the First wearing Buffy and Spike and teaching Eden to be evil. Really original thoughts.

I'm still wondering why the future gang didn't come back to the past to help? I'll just have to wait, I guess.

I like Asher. This chapter assured me that he couldn't possibly be a bad guy. I believe him. I hate when there's new characters though, only because I picture the story as Im reading but I cant put a face to him.

Whom do you picture him looking like?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for another thoughtful review. Your question about the future gang will be addressed (although kind of briefly) at the beginning of the chapter that was just posted. I hope you find the answer plausible. :) So glad you like Asher. He's actually based on a picture I found online of a real person. Since I'm new to Spuffy Realm, I don't know what the restrictions are on posting links, but I will try to post a link below...take a look if you'd like! It's just a random pic (no one I actually know), but it was my inspiration for Asher. http://indulgy.com/post/ahNOYen61/steampunk-guy#/do/from/66377821388 Hope you continue to enjoy! -H