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Reviewer: emokitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2013 - 02:36 am Title: Interlude To The Beginning

Buffy has NO heartbeat!!?? Omgosh I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yep! No heartbeat! Explanations will be in the next chapter! I hope I'll have it done soon! Thanks for the great compliment!!! It's much appreciated!! Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2013 - 07:55 pm Title: Interlude To The Beginning

Buffy has no heartbeat?! Awesome twist! Its obvious this in an AU story and you can have the characters act the way you want-you're the writer. Keep it up, you're doing great!

Author's Response: Yes...no heartbeat! It's actually the first thing I thought of when I thought about this story line. It was just a passing thought when I was watching that movie. And that you for the compliment! I am so excited for you all to read the next chapter...there is going to be some explanations coming up soon! Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: comicbound Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2013 - 06:57 pm Title: Interlude To The Beginning

ah. cliffhanger, grrr. no heartbeat? nice twist.

Author's Response: I know, I know...bad author! Cliffhangers are bad! Haha! But I had to leave it somewhere...couldn't just GIVE you all the answers at once! I'll have chapter 7 up soon! Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2013 - 01:28 pm Title: Interlude To The Beginning

Spike asking about Buffy’s lack of heartbeat was a totally unexpected and wonderful twist to the story! I can’t wait to learn the explanation for that!! I like this Willow much more than canon; Xander & Giles are looking like they are going to be another disappointment. Thanks for the quick updates, looking forward to more soon!

Author's Response: Well so far so good, I've totally blindsided my readers with that little bit of information. And yes...next chapter there will be some explanations going around...you just gotta sit tight and wait for it! I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I get it finished! There's a lot to this one! Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2013 - 11:07 am Title: Interlude To The Beginning

Ooh immortal???
Gotta laugh it sure took Spike a while to figure it out. Or did it?
Good chapter love how you had Willow thinking of both Buffy's and not just being the self involved girl she was later in the show. I sure do like your Willow better. I especially like that she seems to see where Xander and Giles intentions look to be going. Finally someone who can see past herself to worry about someone else.
Yay real people.
Great job honey another wonderful chapter...
But hell they sure are short. :-)
Sorry I'm greedy.


Author's Response: There are a lot of explanations that are going to come out of this and then there are tons of explanations that might come out of it...it's a never ending road of possibility! And yes, Willow has always been one of my favorites of the original scoobies...so I'm hoping to have her some what like she was at the beginning of the series but also like she was towards the end...but maybe have that part of her channeled towards some of the rest of the group, instead of strictly towards Buffy. And thank you so much for the compliment! It means a lot! And yes, I know...I wanted to fit more into this chapter...but I festered on it for a while and couldn't think of what more I could fit into there without infringing on my upcoming chapters. But hey, a short chapter is good for the reader's curiosity sometimes! Haha! And it's ok to be greedy! It's completely allowed here! I'll have the next chapter up hopefully tonight...I've got so much I want to put into it that I'm having a bit of a fit from my muse on how to fit it all together....Thanks so much! :D

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