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Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 - 07:39 pm Title: Breakaway, Part 2

You did a very good job. This was both Hot and Emotional. It was a sweet goodbye to Spuffan. I know you were kinda reluctant about posting but you did good. hon. :)

I can't wait to see how India changes the story now(hope she doesn't die.*crosses fingers*)
I'm not really into girl/girl but I enjoyed it(especially after Spike joined in. lol)

Enjoy your 2 wk hiatus, hope RL is less of a PITA. *hugs and love*

Author's Response: Hey, AMI! I'm glad you liked it! I tried to make it emotional for those of us who aren't really into the G/G stuff, so glad that worked. I really struggled heartily with that chapter, that bit especially. I liked this chapter MUCH MORE after Spike joined in!!! That was no problem to write! LOL! We'll just have to see where my muse goes with India now that he's gotten everyone to like her ...

Thanks so much, AMI ... Glad you liked it. {{smooches}} xo

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2013 - 11:28 pm Title: Breakaway, Part 2

I have to say you sure know how to paint a pretty picture. My oh my. Got me a little hot under the collar.

My only uhn, I guess, is as much as I like the development of Joan's own personality and independence and as nice as this India girl seems, and I don't have an issue with girl on girl slash, obviously. I just hate the thought of breaking up the threesome. It just doesn't feel right.

Author's Response: Hey, Blue Eyes! Glad you enjoyed the pretty picture. heehee! As far as breaking up the threesome ... well, you just never know where my muse will go - honestly I don't even know for sure until I post the chapters, cos he keeps changing his mind. We'll all see how it turns out together... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Always love hearing from you!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2013 - 04:30 pm Title: Breakaway, Part 2

Loved it...Enjoy your two weeks hiatus you deserve it

Author's Response: Glad you loved it! Thanks, Dev. I won't say I enjoyed it - I struggled all through it, still not sure I'm 100% back on track, but hopefully so. Thanks for stopping in!! Love hearing from you.

Reviewer: NathalieJoe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2013 - 02:46 pm Title: Breakaway, Part 2

oh wow! that was fantastic! not too many details ;) there's no such things as that :) thanks!!

Author's Response: Haha! Glad you didn't think there were too many details, Nath!! Glad you're enjoying it! :) Thanks for stopping in here! Really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2013 - 03:11 am Title: Breakaway, Part 2

SO HOT!!! *fanning myself* Love it!

Author's Response: :P Glad it warmed you up! I know the temps there in your sunny state can be so chilly ... doing all I can to help cut heating bills. :) Thanks so much! Really appreciate you stopping in here! {hugs}

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