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Reviewer: Jones103 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2016 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story. Please continue with the excellent character development and unique story line. Trying to patiently for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2015 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh how I love Dawn and how you started this - Looking forward to reading your work.

Author's Response: Hi, nmcil. Thanks for the review, I'm really pleased that you liked how things started, and that you took a shine to dawn. I really like the idea of a Spike/dawn friendship, as well as a Spike/Joyce friendship. I like the idea of giving Spike a place and a family, you know? Sorry for my delay in replying to you, but things have been a little busy for me, but I do promise to reply to all my reviews, so here I am. Thanks once again. Take care. X

Reviewer: redheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2013 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it! :) and I need more!!!! 

pretty please?



Author's Response: So, do the following 15 chapters count? :-) Hi, Redheart, hope you're still reading and enjoying. Thanks for the kind words. Take care.

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2013 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Please, oh please update soon!!



Author's Response: Hi, Shay. I hope you're still sticking with this story, and liking it. I've done as you asked! Heehee. Thanks for the comment. Take care.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2013 - 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start! It's so good to see Xander and Giles mute before Dawn's tongue-lashing. Love it.

Author's Response: Hi Lou. thanks very much for the review. Glad you liked it. Never underestimate Dawns capacity for being a brat, or telling people what she wants! hope you like the rest.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2013 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice job. Please continue.

Author's Response: Another short one which is cool so again.....Thanks and I will.

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2013 - 02:40 am Title: Chapter 1

First, Love Spike defeating Wormtail ... or Doc, I guess. That whole thing seemed lame in canon, Spike being so easily defeated. Secondly, love Dawn standing up for Spike! Finally, her brattiness put to good use! Can't wait to see where you go with it.

Re: beta reader - I emailed you directly.

Author's Response: Thanks P4S, That always bugged me too, spike was good fighter, obviously, and yet he just got brushed aside when he needed to be! in my opinion..Crap. As for Dawn...Never underestimate the power of brattiness, especially when put against Xander's powers of being a c**k! Thanks again for the review and the kind offer to beta for me. x

Reviewer: TheOriginal Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2013 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Love when dawn comes to bat for spike. Can't wait to see see where you take this one. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you Original, I like when Dawn sticks up for spike too, you can't really argue the point with her, its brilliant! my muse is kinda taking the p*** so after chapter 2 things might slow down but I'm trying dammit. Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2013 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg, how much do I love Dawn in this story! Defending Spike, telling everyone they're jerks for not being at least civil to him, and - best of all - hitting Xander for dissing Spike *dances* Hooray for Dawn! heehee

Oh, poor Spikey *cuddles him* Spike being hurt really tugs at my heartstrings. But I like that there's the possibility of Buffy being nice and nursing him back to health :D You describe carnage and gore very well, by the way lol

Great start to the story! Can't wait to see what comes next :)

Author's Response: Well what can I say that hasn't been said already, PB! Its kinda scary putting this out here for everyone to see but at the same time kinda exciting and I've had some really nice comments so Yay! I wish Dawn had showed a bit more backbone at certain points in the show regarding Spike, and hitting Xander? Who honestly hasn't wanted to do that at least once? Yes Spike will be nursed back to health, just don't know how long it's going to take. I'm not sure if I should be pleased or not at having a talent for gore and carnage but hey, I'll take what I can get : ) Thanks again PB, Means a lot x-x-x-x

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2013 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1

I liked the story. I love Dawn and any story that has her and Spike friends works for me. The only suggestion is check your formatting. You could use more space between paragraphs.

Author's Response: Thanks Ginar, I'm with you on that, I liked the dynamic the two of them had up to a point on the show and that, of course, gives people a place to go when writing them. Thanks for the suggestion, I did go back and kind spread certain bits out but i'm still learning the system so my apologies regarding chapter 1 and hopefully chapter 2 is laid out in a more readable fashion. Thanks again for the review and suggestion. x

Reviewer: xXEMProductionsXx Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2013 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Awwww poor Spike it made me cringe at the ideas of his injures that he obtained because of the fall, can't wait to read what happens next great starting chapter xxx

Much Love

Xx Lilly xx

Author's Response: Thanks Lily, sorry to hurt spike so much but, you got to think, yeah spike's tough but he's essentially in a human body. Throw a human body off something tall and have it land on concrete and see what happens! But like Buffy said, as long as he's not dust, he'll be fine, eventually. thanks again for the review. x

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2013 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Grreat start, nice to see Dawn sticking up for Spike. Went off her a bit in s7when she just dropped him. She's making up for it here.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Jane, i'm with you on that, I liked the idea of Dawn and Spike being friends, especially after the summer when Buffy was gone. To have her just turn her back felt like a bit of a slap to the face. (something every spuffy fan has had from Joss or the writers at some point!!) Thanks again. x

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