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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2013 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 1

It's not just the fact there is no spacing, but this story isn't written well at all, the grammar is horrible. I understand it's your first one, but I would really consider getting a beta reader before you post.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2013 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great potential. I like the plot. Paragraphs were not spaced so it was difficult to read. Like it!

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