It seems to be quite common but it bugs me, when the Whirlwind (Darla, Angelus, Drusilla and Spike) is called the Scourge of Europe. The Scourge of Europe (to my knowledge) was another name for Angelus, like Spike was the Slayer of Slayers. I could of course be mistaken.

Did I mention my pet peeve about the 'Powers that be' being refered to by Buffy and her friends? It's because I can't remember it ever happening in the series. I know I'm kind of stupid for getting hung up on stuff like that and now that I got it out of the way: I really like a lot of your ideas and think you are creating a good story with an easy flow.

Maybe Anya should talk to Xander about all his prejudices. I always wondered how Buffy knew that Whistler wasn't evil but kind of like a balancing demon and how she deals with that concept - I mean there are times when she doesn't go for the kill but she doesn't seem to have a thought out method about that and it's not like she ever bothered to learn a lot about the different kinds of demons and so on. Willy's place is kind of like a neutral zone but most of the time it's just plot convenience... *grumble* love it when author's go through the effort of thinking further than that.

Wish you the best and am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for sharing your work.