Chapter One: Still going strong, in my opinion. Spotted a typo though, there was another one in the Prologue. Don't know if you think I'm just being anal for pointing that out but thought I'd mention it.

This chapter:  It gave him a chance to thing,  (pretty sure you meant think)

Prologue: Willow’s barley contained tears (should be barely)

Both typos lead to words that a spellchecker won't catch up on as they are existing in the English language. I've had the problem myself and am thankful if someone points it out to me, so it's really not something I do to annoy.

I'll definitely be looking for updates on this one. Cheers