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Reviewer: miracle_child Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2014 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Interesting backstory, although I'm not clear why driving away would save him from being suspended or expelled. I mean Parker knows who he is, doesn't he? And the teacher must have seen something, probably enough to put two and two together.

Well, I just have to wait for the next chapter. Hope the next part is from Buffy's perspective ;-)

Have fun!



Author's Response: As always, thank you for the awesome review. Nice catch! I went in and changed the line to: “A girl you’re going to get expelled over all because another boy was touching her arm!” Declan was quick to point out. :) You were absolutely right I just hadn't gotten that far yet. The next chapter is complete and has been beta'd I just need to go back over it. It's in Buffy's POV. I had a real hard time finding her voice but once I got started the words wouldn't stop coming. Chapter three is twice as long as chapter two.

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