Reviews For 10:23

Name: Ashlie (Anonymous) · Date: 04/17/2005 - 12:09 am · For: 10:23
forget to add this: so sorry about your friend. I've never lost any friends or anything, 'cept grandparents and distant relatives. No one I've been extremely close too, but I'm dreading the day. I cry at every little thing, and sad things I can't take. I don't do well with pain: internal or external. I will pray for you, and I truly am so sorry about your friend. But remember: Life's not a song. Life isn't bliss. Life is just this: it's living. You'll get along. The pain that you feel only can heal by living. So, even though Dave isn't, congratulate his life and do the cheesy proverbial: live life to the fullest, 'cause there may not be another day. The Hardest thing is this world is to live in it. Be Brave. Live. For Dave. God Bless. ~Ashlie~ (yes, cheesy quotes belong to Buffy.)


Name: Ashlie (Anonymous) · Date: 04/17/2005 - 12:05 am · For: 10:23
is that it? 'cause it says 'not completed'. If it is, though, it stands very well alone. But you could always add on and make it happier. Whatever you do, awesome first chapter/standalone. ~Ashlie~


Name: Cecily (Anonymous) · Date: 09/29/2004 - 03:01 am · For: 10:23
World is harsh and cruel, right? I liked this. God bless.


Name: Tamara (Anonymous) · Date: 09/29/2004 - 02:11 am · For: 10:23
I like it. It can work as both a one shot or a atart of a longer fic. I'm sorry about your friend. Sometomes life just isn't fair.


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