I really like this story but I'm afraid it is so anachronistic that it also makes for painful reading. I am correct in assuming that William and Elizabeth meet in the 19th c. Spike was turned then so it must be early 19thc, and believe me in early 19th century England girls did not talk about sex, they did not sleep with men before marriage, hell , they did not go out with men without a chaperone, they could definitely not talk on the phone, nor would they be saying "ok" "mom" etc.

Author's Response: thank you for reading, anyway, that's what Sara said in her FF, which is posted, too: Author’s note: Some things are a little bit anachronistic, but since I hadn’t chose a determined period , have mercy! ;) Maybe, this kind of things wasn’t allowed then.. but otherwise.. it became so boring ..so, if you find errors about that … just ignore them, ok? so, please, don't mind about the time.. ;)