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Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 07:22 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

whats going on? please dont leave us in suspence ( makes puppy dog eyes). please please please update soon.

Author's Response: I'll do my best. I know it was evil to leave it like that. It shouldn't take too long.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

ill forgive this EVIL cliffhanger IF you post the next chapter really soon

Author's Response: I'm writing, I'm writing! :::runs back to laptop to finish chapter:::

Reviewer: olivia-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

AAAARRRRGGGGGHHHH ! You are soooooo evil ! I really hate you right now, let me tell yeu !!!!

Author's Response: :::more tears::: Please don't hate me.

Reviewer: Noelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 06:58 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

Uh-oh...

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 06:57 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

Oh dear... this looks baaad... I do hope Buffy's going to be OK...

You never finished resolving this, did you, "Seriously Buff, you have got to fire that asshole Jake. The guy's seriously deranged." ? What did Jake do? Why does Faith think he needs to be fired? How did Parker get the drop on Spike? Did Buffy leave a lipstick print on Spike's mouth?


Author's Response: No, I haven't resolved this yet. It will be in the next chapter. Faith will tell Buffy what happened to try to distract her from her misery. Glad you noticed though, that means you pay attention to details ;)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 06:50 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

It's okay if you write in a miscarriage. This story has been a bit too fantastical some times, so it would add a good dose of realism. Not that I'm saying Buffy should go through that, 'cause I know, from experience, how it feels, but it would be a good literary device.



Author's Response: Thanks. You got exactly what my intention was. Reality. And sometimes, things happen at the wrong time. She'd made her peace with the fact she was pregnant, but the timing was still off. They've never even been a couple outside the prison walls yet. It's a story, so yes, I keep it a little on the fantastic side because a story like this couldn't happen in real life, but I still want to add a touch of reality to it.

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: When it rains, it pours


Eh... hate mail?! You betcha!!! :P

Good chapters though, but I really don't want the baby to die

Author's Response: ::tears:: I'm sorry. This was planned all along. I just never thought you guys would get so into the pregnancy angle. It was torturing me every time I'd read a review about this. But I promise things will get better for Spike and Buffy. Eventually ;)

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