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Date: 11/20/2013 - 12:39 am Title: prologue

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Reviewer: Duster Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 - 05:28 pm Title: prologue

Loved it, yes I want a third book, as if there was any doubt.

Reviewer: Patti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2006 - 03:59 am Title: prologue

you know I'm so checking for typos, and any I make in thiese reviews don't count. So, no typos here. Can't say I completely love the grammar in some of the sentences, but hey, you're the writer, I'm just your critic. lol.. The nuns would so have a field day with this. Anyway. So far, you've managed not to screw things up, but you've only written a couple hundred words here.

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 01:03 am Title: prologue

wow deep beginning, very deep. I wonder what's going to happen here. . .

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:30 am Title: prologue

i personly love your story niamh. And hope you continue writing orgin with as many chapter's as you like.cause am so loving your story and hope it never end's

Reviewer: Niamh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: prologue

You know Balula, I might actually be willing to lisen to your point of view if you could actually write proper English.; as it stands I'm not even going to comment. This story is as long as its going to be, as many words as it needs to be and as many chapters as it takes to get the story told the way I want it told. If you have a problem with that, perhaps you shouldn't be reading it. If that's your only criticism, that the story is too long, then I'd say I'm doing exactly what I set out to do. To tell a story at my own pace. I'm really sorry if that doesn't fit with your schedule and/or life. Perhaps a different story and/or author would better suit your requirements. Niamh

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2004 - 05:37 pm Title: prologue

i have always been baffled by writers who can fill pages with emotion. the emotion flying off this chapter overwhelmed me...in a good way. you brought me into that room with buffy and spike and felt her utter pain and his and i felt their love.....not many writers or people in gerneral can do that......and that is just what you did......please update soon

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2004 - 07:38 pm Title: prologue

Well luv you are doing it you are telling the story you have always wanted to tell and how it should of been....This last chapter was fabulous...espcially with Giles so happy to see Buffy but yet he is seething with Anger at Willow...ohhhhhh can't wait to see how he rings her neck.....

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2004 - 05:30 am Title: prologue

love all the cryptic talk and big words...

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