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Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Re: reviews: for me at least it's been a really long weekend. I'm behind on a bunch of stories, but I'm thrilled to see several updates for this one! I love Dawn and Spike's interaction. One of my favorite parts of season 6 and early season 6. I'm looking forward to seing what scheme the two of them come up with!

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 04:48 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I'm still totally interested in this story and you're updating at a very good pace. I really love this story and can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

OMG dont stop updating so frequently, i love this and alwasy review wen i read, some people might be stupid and not review or lazy or couldnt so dont just stop updating i love it. if u stopped i wouldnt be hapyp. i love this story and am sp happy u update. i really hope that buffy and spike get together and that the plan works. i thought it was so smart of dawn to explain that just becuz she dated a vampire doesnt mean it will be the same if she dated another one. please update as soon as u can, the make me so happy and i cant wait to read wat happens next thanx

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I absolutely loved Dawn in this- at least she's trying to play a positive middleman. Plus, it's not too often I enjoy her in stories, so kudos! As for the reviews, you've been posting over weekend time (Friday, Saturday, today), and I think reviews lack over those days because people are more busy, going out and stuff. I really wouldn't worry- I still love your story, as do a lot of other people, so keep on posting:)

Reviewer: momzilla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

daily updates are a wonderful thing! I've really enjoyed this story so far, and can't wait to find out how Dawn is going to fix everything. I don't think she's given enough credit normally, and it's nice to see her taking an active role in this story.

Reviewer: Raspy_luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Wow...that worked. 24+ reviews. :) Love the story. Searching on other sites to see if I can catch it in completion, but no go...have to wait.

Author's Response: This is the most complete version that exists. Anywhere. My hard drive included. This fic isn't finished yet, and not just in the sense that I haven't posted all of it.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

no!! no!! that'll be so unfair to the people that review faithfully every chapter!! :( anyhow...i loved spike and dawn interaction!! i missed that in the show and most fanfics!! awesome chapter!! fantastic!! thanx!! hope you update regularly...please...i just adore your fic and i've been waiting patiently a long long time!! pretty please!!

Reviewer: NEO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I am still very interested, the story is getting to really good parts between B/S. I love it when authors update almost every day, then I can keep up with the story and not forget what happened. I like to remember what is going on, especially when it is a good story. I know I dont reveiw every time because some days I may read quite a few updates, and if it is not a real big turing point in the story, I usually say great update, hope to see more soon, or the like. It just gets monotonous, and I like to review every time, but how many ways can you say the same thing. Also from my end writing the same short review every time seems to me I am insulting or demanding upon the author. So, rant finished, this is the longest review I have ever written, and I hope it convinces you too keep up just as you have been.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Wonderful chapter. I'm glad that Dawn is acting on their behalf. Buffy and Spike are just too stubborn for their own good. And it is a little known fact that you can never update too often. ; ) Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

great updates on the last two chapters please keep them coming frequently

Reviewer: monica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

good stuff... keep it up and update just as frequently as you are now :)

Reviewer: javelina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

No, no, don't stop updating! This is a lot of fun and I find I'm really enjoying this new "back in Sunnydale" section. Thanks for giving us presents like this story - please don't ever think it's unappreciated. I'm usually too stressed to review (job, small child, no money, very aging parents with Ailments 1500 miles away ... the usual), but I always enjoy your work. So please consider this a blanket comment covering numerous stories and chapters and everything.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 02:16 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I just started this story tonight. I really like it. Not what I expected, coz I hate all human fantasy fics. But this one is just right. I want to hear Dawn's plan. Update when you can.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

See. Reviewing. This is me reviewing this fic. So... no need to do anything drastic. Anyway. I love the non-brat version of Dawn. You gave us a little hope at the end of this chapter. Maybe between Spike and Dawn they can get Buffy to see the light.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

no don't stop or slow down! I check several sites and can not remember where I reveiw. great story. please update soon.

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I think you should continue updating as often as possible. I also think that Dawn is a very bright girl in this. Her whole speech about her having the memories of her life and therefore Buffy's experience as Elizabeth with Spike/William being real too was fantastic.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

This is a great story. Sorry we didn't stay in the book longer. They could have had a happy ever after with family. Please update.

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

NOOOOO!! Keep updating. Be patient. It's the weekend. People are probably out and stuff. :)

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I love this story, and I really like the frequent updates, it keeps me on my toes.

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Update loads!!!! more updates! Dawn cracks me up. LOL smacking Spike in the head. Still interested, still reading

Reviewer: MonaT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Don't you bloody dare. I will hunt you down and beat you. . . and I know where to find you, you wench, so don't pretend that you can hide. . . I will find you. . . .

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Please continue to update, I check every day for the next chapter, then can't wait to read it......oh, and by the way, I love it!!! I am wayyyyyy interested. thanks

Reviewer: Li Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

NOOO, it's good! It's great! =) As much as I loved Elizabeth&William, I knew it wasn't going to last. I'm happy how you've made the transistion to the real world though, realistic. Our two heroes need to grow up & and realize they are perfect for eachother instead of making themselves miserable. Please keep up the good work, and dont think for a second we've lost interest.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

NO!! Loving the frequent updating. Although I have found that weekends are not usually high on the reviews. I seriously doubt anyone has lost interest. I love how you have Dawn diving in to make it all better and in helping Buffy to see sense. It's all any of us could wish for!

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Glad you updated. Dawn- the voice of reason. Hope the conspiracy works.

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