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Reviewer: kitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2012 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation

grammatical error... she has it bad all ready is suposed to be already

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation

Giles is always to much fun when he's drunk, and Xander and Spike attempting a truce for even all of 10 seconds was a great moment. And it is so beautiful to see Buffy finally getting a peaceful nights sleep. Great chapter.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation

loved it

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation

Drunk GIles is always so fun :-) And Willow was so in character, I was cracking up. Sad that this is the most recent chapter, but I love the story and I can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation

I appreciate you churning the chapters out so quickly, but my gosh, you really need a beta to help you! You have thinking instead of thanking, Faith instead of Buffy, and tons of other mistakes that a second person reading over would catch. Please consider having it read over before posting!!!

Author's Response: Sorry about the errors but my beta and I are starting to belive this chapter was cursed. We read it several times and kept finding errors. I think we finally got it under control, so the newly updated version has been posted. Sorry about that, we appreciate you and all the others who brought this to our attention. Thanks :)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation

See, I already read the reviews, so I don't need to mention the Buffy/Faith name change. It's funny, I have to remind myself that Faith is who she is. I remember who Buffy is, but I just can't get a picture of Faith without the slang usage and attitude, unless I imagine the body switching episode and then I can. It's just hard, but I LOVE this story and everything is going great. Wonderful!

Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation

I'm loving it (though I know I haven't reviewed before, sorry about that). You are a great writer and character development so far has been great, however just a little nitpick, you may want to go over the last four paragraphs because I think you switched the names of Faith and Buffy in a couple of places.

Reviewer: Pin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 15: A drunk, a truce and an unexpected invitation

Hi! Great chapter; I like the truce conversation. Did you flip the Faith/Buffy references in the last couple of paragraphs?

Author's Response: Bloody hell, I don't know how my beta and I both missed that :) I guess that means we are tired and need a break! Thanks for the heads up!

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