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Date: 08/26/2005 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 8: Attitude Adjustment

Riley at Buffy's door!?! Well, I love the chapter, but that really needs some explaining! To chapter 9!

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Date: 08/26/2005 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 7: In the heat of the moment

"She didn’t know it, but that kiss given in the heat of the moment had convinced him that she was worth risking anything for." A brilliant, unsurprising twist. And I imagine the chip not firing will come up again later. Love their chemistry, the two outcasts amongst the scoobies. Lovely.

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Date: 08/26/2005 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 6: A lively debate about the rights of the unalive

Spike would do anything for this girl, and honestly, she's a good bit more rational that the actual BtVS Buffy. Can't wait to see her and Spike have a "conversation." :)

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Date: 08/26/2005 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter 5: How to say hello, Sunnydale style

“I’m not a vampire but Angel keeps trying to sell me on the idea that I’m a slayer like your girl here.” Love how things can so simply be broken down to their exact elements if people just are upfront with things. Great chapter... though it would have been fun if Buffy got to kick Riley's ass too. :)

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Date: 08/26/2005 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 4: Debts waiting to be paid

Love seeing the good come out in our girl, and can't wait to get to good ol' Sunnyhell!

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Date: 08/26/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 3: Breakdown

Way to go non-victim Buffy. Empty, perhaps, but I really love her tenacity.

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Date: 08/26/2005 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1: Bitter Revelations

“I also know men and you didn’t walk away because you loved her too much to stay, you walked away because you loved the pain more."--So calling the bastard out on it. A brilliant revelation! Lovely insight. Superb chapter!

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Date: 08/26/2005 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 1: Working the streets

“I have a soul.” “I don’t.” Everything going on in this story kind of comes down to that simple little exchange... and though I want to see Buffy saved, the resolve of this empty hollow girl, I must say, I find it intriguing. Great chapter.

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Date: 08/01/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter 34: Taking back control

I really loved the part before she was turned because she had a charme over her and she was not to be fucked with, but i don´t think she is much fun now, so if i can gaive you a advise ` Make her a person again `and i don´t mean a human but you should try to give her a little fire again, that little spark ya know? give her a personalily ( is my spelling right? ) again. Because, before she got turned, she was her own master, she did only as she wanted and she did NOT play puppy for anyone. But it is like that now, she just go with whatever comes around and do what everyone says. But i like the story very much but it waould be very fin if you could give that spark back=0)

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Date: 07/16/2005 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 34: Taking back control

I love this story! I've been going crazy with no updates and finally an update! I love you! Great chapter, great plan, and update sooner k?

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Date: 07/03/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 34: Taking back control

Oh she's back.........oh nice set up for the battle....can't wait for the next chapter.....

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 34: Taking back control

Damn god ficcie part I loves it

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 34: Taking back control

Oh crap. I'm out of chapters. lol! Well, anyway, I love love love this story! Please update really soon! I can't WAIT to see what happens next! And Tony Robins? lol! My mom was addicted to him for awhile! A cruel phase. She was constantly quoting him, drove me crazy! Oh well! I'll stop babbling! Update soon please!

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 32: From joking to screaming

Ok, the beginning was an absolute riot! Really really funny!! Awesome job! Now I'm beyond curious as to what the yell is!! Eeek!

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 30: Getting aquainted

Oh man... Wes.... As incredibly funny it is to read his part in this.... it's almost as hard to picture Wes in the part. Cos, I mean, it's WES! lol! Still, really good chapter!

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 29: It's a small world

Oooooooooooh man! Wes?? That's just, oh man! And Spike is so gonna hate him! Fun stuff! Nice twist!

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 28: Connections

I think I know how Buffy feels... my mind is totally bogged down with information! That was a LOT to take in! I don't know how you came up with that all, but man! You did an amazing job with it! Really awesome (literally mind boggling) chapter!

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter 26: Silent prayers

Wow, so so so much to think about! Really deep thoughts too! Really wow! Can't wait to find out who the she is!

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 11:10 am Title: Chapter 25: Buzz kill

Oh good god! What just happened!? ACK! That JERK Angel!! ARGH! I'm beyond glad I have the next chapter to go to!!

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 09:26 am Title: Chapter 20: A choice of deaths

Oh man, cancer. When she said she was dying, I thought she meant, like her soul was dying, I didn't think it was literal! Man oh man! And now she's gonna get turned? Wow! What a twist! Really good chapter!

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Date: 07/02/2005 - 09:17 am Title: Chapter 19: A moment of life and an eternity of death

Oh wow! What a chapter! She's crying, which is huge, and she's admitting she loves him, also huge! Really really good chapter!

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Date: 07/01/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 34: Taking back control

Ahhh...! It was sooo worth the wait. THANK YOU THANK YOU!!

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Date: 07/01/2005 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 34: Taking back control

Yay today is the day of long awaited updates! Buffy is so smart, love the plan. Thanks for updating!! =)

Reviewer: Themis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2005 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 34: Taking back control

I'm so glad that you are back. I love your stories and I was sad that this one was unfinished. Great update, I am eager for more.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2005 - 11:43 am Title: Chapter 6: A lively debate about the rights of the unalive

Wow, another really good point. Buffy's whole spiel there... really good!

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