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Reviewer: Jason P Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2005 - 08:59 pm Title: Express Yourself

Excellent cliffhanger

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 05:51 am Title: Express Yourself

You're right that was very evil ending there. And I happen to like long chapters, very long chapters. I was wondering how you were going to get them to talk again without it being weird, but I think you did a great job of that. Update soon.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 04:14 am Title: Express Yourself

I'd probably come out with a smart ass remark for Buffy. Like..."Well, I guess being a 'rock star' explains the flaming asshole vibe you give off." Or, "So what's your excuse for being such a dick?" I'd think she'd be a bit offended by that remark! He was an ass to her, and I think that even if they were both shitty to each other, she doesn't have to take his lip without giving some back. Besides, it wouldn't be Spuffy without the snarkiness lol.

Reviewer: Kar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Express Yourself

Gah!! You left us there? Naughty writer! Please more, I beg you

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 12:43 am Title: Express Yourself

Yay, Spike's back! I dunno, I kind of envisioned her trying to play it cool for a little while - acting like he didn't really affect her that much (but she'd give in, of course :) ) that's really the only suggestion I can think of - but I'm sure whatever you come up with will be great! So, great story and can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: BINT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: Express Yourself

MORE PLEASE I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND SPIKE IS BACK ITS SO CUTE MORE NOW!!!!!

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 09:19 pm Title: Express Yourself

Aww what a cliffhanger!! Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 09:00 pm Title: Express Yourself

I knew it! I KNEW IT!! Didn't I tell you I don't like cliffhangers, unless I'm the one writing them LOL! Just kidding!! Great chapter and I can't wait for the next update, because that was just mean :-)

Reviewer: pj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: Express Yourself

ahhhh what a cliffhanger! totally threw me off guard, good job ;) I think Buffy would logically be shocked that he's there, kinda angry and embarrassed that he was listening, and trying to pull away from the whole situation even if she does want to see him! cant wait :)

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