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Reviewer: deb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 06:50 am Title: Chapter 29: 'Beneath You'

Please continue to flesh out Buffy independence and getting Angel out of her life. Joyce will add a new dimension to the story. Although I love the Spuffy aspect of the story, it's got to be a tough one to write. Their relationship (illicit affair) is not "hot" because their getting away with something, it's hot because they are finally getting together like they should have in the beginning, and healing each others insecurities. Anyone who has seen an affair in real life, or been asked to cover for someone understands the difficulty in divided loyalties. I would love to encourage you to have Buffy separate from Angel, be independent (even if it means she can't see Spike for a short time) and get herself together. Meantime, Spike can assist Angel in getting caught for his wrong doings, and out of the way. I like the fic. Please do finish it.

Author's Response: Thank you. Actually, this was my first fic I ever wrote and posted anywhere on the web. It's completed (like 48 chapters) and I'm just editing it and submitting it here. If you would like to finish it, then I will finish posting it here. Thank you again, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Syl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 29: 'Beneath You'

I enjoyed reading this fic before and am glad to see it continue here. I seldom review but do want to tell you that I like the way the story is unfolding. Buffy wasn't very nice iniitially and I like the way you are softening her. Please continue!

Author's Response: Thank you. I re-wrote this fic to post it here and I think it's actually better on this site. This is my first real fiction I wrote (I did do another, but it was just awful!) and I love it very much. Luv, Spuf

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