[Report This]Date: 06/06/2010 - 02:34 am Title: 13
that was fuckin hot!!! Most peope would think thats gross but that was SO hot!!
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2009 - 01:27 pm Title: 13
It was slightly weird to read that I will admit, however I've never been a mother so I guess I really have no reason to complain. I didn't find anything about it paedophilish (it wasn't the baby either of them wanted sexually) so I dont' see anything wrong with it, just weird. Because, you know . . . baby sucking nipple while Spike sucks the other. But nothing gross. Just odd. I don't even know if I made any sense.
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2008 - 07:38 am Title: 13
hey what s with the dru prediction ? you talking about the one she said when she found him? if it is its bloody beautiful. love it so far. but I think that the saying was burn baby fish swiming all around. or did you mean to shorten it still its great your a real great writer cant wait to find out about this demon .
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2006 - 11:00 am Title: 13
Sweet Jesus... this chapter was freaking HOT!!! Can't wait to read more. I hate that I have to stop reading to go into work, I can't wait to be home tonight to keep going! Wonderful job so far!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: 13
That was one of the most loving and beautiful chapters I've ever read. Well written :)
Date: 04/14/2005 - 02:22 pm Title: 13
that was beautiful. you will not lose me as a reader!!!
Date: 04/01/2005 - 04:56 pm Title: 13
Awe, I loved the chapter! This is really awesome, a different kind of mating, family mating, Lia claiming her parents too. :) I'm late reading, therefore I'm late reviewing!
Date: 04/01/2005 - 04:47 am Title: 13
Wow! That was really cool! I kinda love how this whole thing is weaving it's way together. Like, maybe Olivia didn't leave as much as she wasn't chosen... This story just gets better with every chapter. Absolutely fabulous. PS-- I love this line--"A hot and intense blue that Buffy knew was her new favourite colour."
Date: 03/31/2005 - 03:49 pm Title: 13
Well, it's probably good that you put the warning at the top of the chapter, but I have to say I found nothing wierd in all of this. Don't have children myself, but it seems to me that motherhood is pretty much linked to sex. I do think Buffy's handling this all well, of course whatever demon thing Lia is doing probably helps with that.
Date: 03/31/2005 - 06:50 am Title: 13
Kinkty but not of the bad......very interesting bonding of the three you worked out.....but I need to know how Buffy now can breast feed.....that has peaked my interest......Haven't lost me......
Date: 03/31/2005 - 05:30 am Title: 13
oh, yeah. I missed this chapter. Now that makes so much more sense. :) I still can't wait to find out about Lia's background. update soon chica
Date: 03/31/2005 - 04:45 am Title: 13
You definitely haven't lost me as a reader. Loved it. It was beautiful in a weird way. I think this story is great.
Date: 03/31/2005 - 03:37 am Title: 13
when you say "made it to the end" you don't mean THE end right?? this continues...right??!!!! i love what you've done with the story!! is so sexy... and i imagine it's pretty normal in parenthood... well, anyhow, so many thanx and please please update soon!!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 02:40 am Title: 13
No no no. . can't be over yet. Please make it not be over. What about . . where she comes from and . . and what what about Giles and what about everyone else? And Joyce? and c'mon there's got to be at least another 10. . 15. . . 20 chatpers in this baby. . *laughs* c'mon please?
Date: 03/31/2005 - 02:31 am Title: 13
Awwww. Wonderful chapter. How can anyone be squicked out about such love? Beautifully done.
Date: 03/31/2005 - 01:57 am Title: 13
Didn't loose me, grin! I love the twist of the baby being part demon and her claiming Buffy and Spike, grin! I like where you are taking this story and absolutely love the title. Looking forward to more! Hey I'm a mother of 3, know exactly what you mean on the shower scene and above, wicked grin! Take it when you can get it, lol... Love it, keep up the good work! :-)
Date: 03/31/2005 - 12:50 am Title: 13
loved the chapter! cant wait for more
Date: 03/31/2005 - 12:29 am Title: 13
huh, can't say i was offended! Wondering what will happen when Giles comes back though... thanks for the frequent updates!
Date: 03/31/2005 - 12:20 am Title: 13
Definitely didn't lose this reader. I absolutely loved this chapter, love the deep connection that Buffy is beginning to develop with Lia and Spike and how she instinctively knows, even if at first she was afraid, that they're her family now. Can't wait for more!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:52 pm Title: 13
No problem with that chapter since I am the mom of 2 breastfed babies. Things like this do happen and at least Buffy didn't have to deal with the lack of sleep and lack of desire most new moms do. Love this story.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:50 pm Title: 13
Wow. That was probably the most sensually erotic and loveliest thing I have ever read. Many who have never had children won't understand that nursing can be a very erotic and arousing experience. Significant others (husbands, boyfriends, girlfriends, etc) tend to enjoy nursing on the mother's breasts as well. I think you perfectly captured the eroticism and natural splendor that is parenthood with this chapter. Buffy's fear and confusion giving way to awe, possessiveness and climax was just amazing. I am intrigued to find out more about Lia's species and how she was able to "choose" her parents and make Buffy lactate. Spike's extreme arousal at Lia nursing on Buffy was very hot. His possessiveness towards his new family makes me wanna jump his sexy bones. I love how you have infused a feeling of human and demon family traits and feelings with this chapter. Wonderful, amazing chapter. And don't let anyone else tell you otherwise. If people don't this chapter and give you grief, they have no excuse. Your warnings were very clear and noticeable. Kudos to your bravery!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:46 pm Title: 13
Awe... that was the end? I just started to read this.. ummm, last night? Or something... on bloodshedverse and folloed it here.... So, just wanted to say I enjoyed it!
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:37 pm Title: 13
I just want to say that I really enjoyed this and every other chapter, and I really look forward to reading more.
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:33 pm Title: 13
Completely awesome! Crazy twists but nicely written nonetheless. Nice tie-in with the 'burning baby fishes' line...Lia's not going to burn, right?! LOL This chapter didn't bother me, so you've still got at least one faithful reader:)
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