[Report This]Date: 04/29/2009 - 12:10 pm Title: 7
Poor Spike! Finally gets to have sex and she smacks him! Aw, well. That's Buffy for ya.
Gonna say, I'm not really a huge fan of how fast they got together in your story. I'm kinda one of those people who enjoy the build-up. Still, the sex scene you wrote is probably one of the hottest, best written sex scenes I've read recently.
Oh, and regarding your author's note--I didn't really find it squicky that he fingered Buffy while they were bathing Ophelia. It's not like the baby will remember, and there wasn't anything sexual INVOLVING the baby, so I don't know if that's why people were offended but I wasn't. It didn't even occur to me that it would be.
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2006 - 10:06 pm Title: 7
Hi! This story is SO amazing, I'm having a blast reading it. You're so gifted, I can't wait to read what's in store in the next chapters. Great job so far! :D
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2005 - 01:01 pm Title: 7
Well you definitely can write a sex scene...Bravo and you captured 'BITCH Buffy' very well :) That was freakin HOT!!!
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2005 - 05:22 pm Title: 7
Well, I can see I'm going to have fun catching up with this story! Hee.
Date: 03/28/2005 - 04:44 am Title: 7
Poor them. It would always be much smoother if they could just be honest. But the drama is always fun too.
Date: 03/26/2005 - 05:03 am Title: 7
that was a bit crude for a first time
Date: 03/25/2005 - 03:38 am Title: 7
although i thought about it...it didn't offend me, cos the baby is too young yet...but anyhow...great chapter!!! awesome smut!! but i'm not clear about something...buffy was in deed a virgin or just acted like one and fled virtue fluttering?? anyway...so glad you're updating more often!! i'm so thankful for that!! rreeeealllllyyy hope you udpate soon ;)
Date: 03/24/2005 - 09:49 pm Title: 7
Buffy's reaction stuck to true form, but I hope she will be nicer soon. I loved Spike taking a sip.
Date: 03/24/2005 - 07:39 pm Title: 7
She woiuldn't be Buffy if she didn't scamper off like that. I hope she comes around soon.
Date: 03/24/2005 - 05:53 pm Title: 7
Not offended by the shower thing in the previous chapter, just finding it easy to visuoalize accidentally dropping poor Lia when they were --- er-- distracted. And I can't imagine explaining *that* at the emergency room! Nice update too-- and the slap and then run thing is so, so Buffy!
Date: 03/24/2005 - 05:52 pm Title: 7
Wow - what a chapter *smile* good that's rather cold today... I'm not cold anymore now :-) But oh my, Buffy, thinking one thing and doing the contrary... wonder what will happen next.
Date: 03/24/2005 - 04:51 pm Title: 7
And i here i thought she wont be doing the running after all that..... love it waiting for more!!
Date: 03/24/2005 - 04:15 pm Title: 7
LOL I'm sure there are worse things in the world than having sex up against a door:) That rocked, by the way! It's good Lia is a sound sleeper, too!
Date: 03/24/2005 - 04:12 pm Title: 7
Okay. . . I read this during my lunch break. . . . OH MY. what the hell have I been missing? why in all the seven hells didn't someone tell me about this? I mean really. . .sheesh. This is great. Really great. Can't wait to see what happens next. Will she continue to be all mean girl or will she just give in to the hottest vamp ever? Stay tuned folks. . . .
Date: 03/24/2005 - 03:48 pm Title: 7
Sooooooo hot and soooooo heartbreaking! Aaaargh. *bitch slaps Buffy* Your imagery, the sensations, the heat you built were so incredibly fascinating. Thank god for this story and your abilities. I can't wait to see the angst that could arise from Buffy's rejection.
Date: 03/24/2005 - 03:20 pm Title: 7
It's 30 degrees and I'm sweating! GREAT CHAPTER! But don't you just hate that once again Buffy blames Spike for ALL! Please! The girl has rocks for brains (my personal opinion). The VAMP is SO HOT and she was totally into it until.... it's all over and she "kicks him in the head and runs away". Stupid stupid Buffy. More of that Please (and how nice for little Lia to sleep through the whole thing - what a sweet matchmaking little baby!)
Date: 03/24/2005 - 01:34 pm Title: 7
*fans self* That was pretty hot! Though I feel bad for Spike and Buffy too now. Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 03/24/2005 - 01:09 pm Title: 7
great chapter.... cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 03/24/2005 - 12:29 pm Title: 7
Oh my that was hot.....and Buffy being silly Buffy had to hit and run.....so like her.....LOL
Date: 03/24/2005 - 10:41 am Title: 7
Great chapter..you got Buffy spot on at the end there.... Also wanted to say I wasn't offended in the least by the last chapter, some people complain just to complain. I wouldn't take it personally. And you did leave a warning, kind of. Been reading since the beginning, and loving it. Keep it coming, please Luv much -Shady
Date: 03/24/2005 - 08:44 am Title: 7
I swear, that girl thinks too much for her own good. She's detrimental to her own happiness. But other than that, wow, that was an amazing scene.
Date: 03/24/2005 - 07:56 am Title: 7
Oh wow!! That was extremely hot and WOW!! Speechless right now cause I'm still panting, but this was great!!! Can so not wait for more....especially with that cliffy!!
Date: 03/24/2005 - 07:11 am Title: 7
and again with the freakin YUM!! I'll be getting this baby up on the BSV tomorrow and I'm working on banner-age also for the teenybop tribute. Oh, remember Wham? Now there's another band i had the hots for. GAWD i was lame. *head desk*
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