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Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2009 - 12:41 pm Title: 9

The redhead had her arms full of baby when Buffy rushed from the bathroom, steam and faint fruity smells drifting out behind her. Spike hovered at Willow’s elbow, attempting to act all cool and evil, but Buffy felt stunned by the look of protective concern for the little girl that clouded the clear blue. His eyes were trained on Willow like a hawk, ready to spring to action should he not approve of any of the witch’s moves. Buffy didn’t know whether to smile affectionately or gulp in horror.

That embodies Spike so well in my mind! Spike would totally do that. "Yeah, I totally don't give a rat's arse 'bout the baby . . . hold her wrong an' I'll tear your throat out! I mean, not that I care or anythin' . . ."

It may have been Buffy's first with Spike, but it wasn't her first time with sex. Come on. Their first time in the show was not so dissimilar.

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: 9

I didn't read the previous reviews but from your author's notes I take it there was some issue with the totally hot sex? Hmmmm. NC-17 does imply sex and lots of it. Maybe the readers are very young and , uh, don't have much experience? As a middle-aged mother, I think you are doing just fine! Also, guh! Very hot.

Reviewer: Isabel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2005 - 01:22 pm Title: 9

I love this story. It's really sweet and the way Spike and Buffy's relationship is evolving so fast is really great. Keep writing!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2005 - 05:04 am Title: 9

And Spike goes on with the big responsibility. And Buffy decides their are a little family. Like how the baby is really pulling them together, like it really is theirs.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 05:57 pm Title: 9

Well that was a little taste of yummy! Love the internal buffy dialog and the bit with the fashion and willow's lack thereof. Showing the many facets of Spike is nice too! as far as their first time being crude? 2 consenting adults - babe asleep, vamp with 100+ yrs of kink experience to go with the missionary victorian? I don't see crude - I see Spuffiness spurting all over the place! Thanks for the GREAT chap! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 02:32 pm Title: 9

Buffy's mental aside about Willow's fashion sense was funny and appropriate - you'd think Buffy would have had a talk with her years ago! Sweet, comforting Spike is lovely to read. Buffy hates to be vulnerable, and you're doing a good job keeping her on the knife's edge questioning if her desire for Spike makes her weak. I'm sure there'a lots of reassurance and passion to come.

Reviewer: Kimber Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 01:32 pm Title: 9

Oh, no smut, lol, only kidding.......nice chapter with now letting them, especially Buffy start to wonder about the passion.....can't wait to see where you go here......

Reviewer: Cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 09:23 am Title: 9

And I really love your story :) Mmmh, like how Spike cares about Buffy. And:
Happy Easter to you!

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 08:23 am Title: 9

This is in no way squicky! What is beautiful is their passion! Champagne and roses: boring! Plus how more cutesy can it get: teary buffy and daddy spike, I am melting. You're writing my fav combo of sexy, silly, smutty, fluffy, funny spuffy! i hope you'll write more stories with this recipe.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 04:48 am Title: 9

great update cant wait for more

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 04:43 am Title: 9

great chapter!! wonder if Willlow picked up anything from the two of them.....

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 04:15 am Title: 9

wasn't saying it wasn't hot...just saying it wasn't roses on the bed, bubbles in the bath, romantic, either...the way all girls picture how they want their first times to be; especially with their true love. They want it too be special and on the sofa isn't exactly what I'd call special...hot, yeah, special; no! same goes for the shower scenerio - was it steamy ---hell, yeah--, but in the end I always pictured spike being tender and caring, and that wasn't...and I know it isn't a relationship, but damn it I want the girl to be treated right...with Angel she wasn't, with Parker, she wasn't...with Riley, she wasn't she should be with Spike!

Reviewer: samica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 03:14 am Title: 9

Really loving Spike and Buffy's reactions to each other.

Reviewer: s.p. hudson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 02:47 am Title: 9

oh, I do like this. Sweet and smutty. Add Spuffy and it's a winner! Ahh, do carry on....

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 02:44 am Title: 9

I know I keep saying it but another great chapter. Spike was very sweet to Buffy. Please update when able. I love this story.

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 01:40 am Title: 9

Another fabulous chapter! Willow needs to improve her fashion sense, though LOL So true to her character's outfits, especially in the beginning seasons. Still loving the Spuffyness:)

Reviewer: Niamh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 01:20 am Title: 9

Absolutely nothing squicky about anything in this story. Its so right on and adorable. And Buffy's inner voice is great. So sweet. Don't stop writing this . . can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: redwulf50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 01:20 am Title: 9

damn good chappie, poor spike no sex this chappie :P

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 01:19 am Title: 9

Another great chapter. I like sweet Spike. Whatever are they going to buy at the mall?

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