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Reviewer: pj Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 11:05 am Title: Splintering

Gasp! Oh no! Don't have Parker hurt her too bad :( Lovely Spike emotion in this chapter ~ keep 'em coming :D

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Splintering

Why that sneaky, slimy, filthy, lowdown, bastardly, sleezy little prick! He probably got wind of B & S and was planning to catch them together or maybe someone at the party let something slip and now he's planning to lay into Buffy big time! I hope you have a particularly henious Parker-bashing session planned for when you decide he's no longer needed in this tale cause at this point I wish I could write myself into the tale and torture him to death slowly over 10 chapters! What a waste of skin he is! On an up note - GREAT UPDATE. I hope Buffy really does find a way to put her complete trust in Spike and Spike et al come up with a plan to rescue Buffy from that pond-scummy, flea-bitten, cowardly cur! Oh and about the slower than usual updates? No worries - with a 2 year old in the house I'm surprised you have time to write at all! And they grow so fast (my oldest just moved out a month ago and I swear I was just rocking him to sleep last year !!?!!) so you take time to get all the snuggles and chases and playing you can now - we'll wait for the great writer Ashlee! Thanks for finding the time to share your talent with everyone!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, it is hectic to write with a 2 year old, but it's my way to wind down when he's sleeping or during that magical hour of the day when he's watching 'Wiggles' (aka God's gift to parents). And Parker will eventually get what's coming to him- rewatching the season 4 episodes makes me hate him even more now, because I hadn't watched any since I started writing this LOL! I'll have another update soon!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Splintering

im so glad your back. i was dying over here with no updates. cant wait for more. pretty please update soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:18 am Title: Splintering

Oh no! You just can't leave it there! Poor Buffy, I just don't like the looks of this. One can hope that perhaps Spike can intervene. What a cliff hanger. Such fabulous writing, I just so wish that our heroine wasn't in the perdicament. Great chapter. Please, update soon as you get a chance...

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 02:57 am Title: Splintering

ughhh disgusting i hope the guys beat the crap outta parker. but yeah very awesome fic. =) love the plot though it breaks my heart, that this kinda stuff happens everyday in real life =( and i also love the way u write

Reviewer: Laine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 02:45 am Title: Splintering

i'm really starting to hate Parker.. lol but, love this update...

Reviewer: ebontier Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 12:23 am Title: Splintering

I just got caught up...and I'm fully prepared to witness some serious Parker Death. Great story though.

Reviewer: Demonica Mills Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 11:37 pm Title: Splintering

Ack! Cliffhanger. Okay, now you need to update right away because I just know that something is going to happen when Spike shows up. I really enjoy the friend angle that you have going on with Spike and Angel. Could completely picture frat guys throwing peanuts at each other. update soon

Reviewer: Spikes Sweety Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 11:33 pm Title: Splintering

Oh no! I love this story. More soon!

Reviewer: jessiesaly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 11:20 pm Title: Splintering

OMG! I can't wait to see what happens when Spike gets to Buffy's dorm room. This is going to be interesting. Hurry up and write the next chappi.

Reviewer: stace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: Splintering

gah! oh no! run buffy run! heh. good chappie. everytime i read i just want to ring parker's friggin neck. grr.

Reviewer: Kez Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 09:53 pm Title: Splintering

Hey! thats not fair! leaving us like that! Please give us more soon! Happy birthday to your son!

Reviewer: jess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Splintering

love this story, hope you update again soon;)

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 09:01 pm Title: Splintering

Uh oh.... UH OH!!! Not good!! *warning bells* Gah!!! Oooh!! Maybe Spike will beat the crap outta parker eh??? That would be SPIFFY!!! Update soon!! PS: Happy Birthday to your little one!!

Reviewer: Kerrylee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 08:42 pm Title: Splintering

This fic is really great.Can't wait for Parker to get what's coming to him,hopefully very soon.Also love the fact that Spike and Angel are good friends .Happy belated B'day to your son too.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Splintering

Oh no, not good!! (I mean the chapter was good, just not Parker showing up, you know what I mean) ...

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 07:29 pm Title: Splintering

oh no this can't be happening. i hope buffy and spike are going to be ok and that parker gets what he desereves. great update can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Charlene Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 07:26 pm Title: Splintering

Oh, this CAN'T be good. Is Parker a kii joy or what? Ashlee, you have such a way with words. Another awesome chapter and I can't wait to see what transpires.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 07:00 pm Title: Splintering

great chapter... cant wait to see what happens when spike shows up..

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 05:49 pm Title: Splintering

Aww poor Buffy...Awesome chapter! Well done :)

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 05:40 pm Title: Splintering

OMG! Cliffhanger much? lol! Please update soon, cause I can't wait for Spike to show up and beat the crap out ofnParker! I'm worried for both Buffy and Spike';s safety, nao please don't keep us waiting for too long! ; )

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 05:36 pm Title: Splintering

I enjoyed the interlude with Spike and Angel, you're doing a good job writing their friendship and Spike's anxiety. Parker's unexpected arrival was nice and menacing. What will happen when Spike drops by in an hour? I'm already tensed up!

Reviewer: Caatje Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 04:41 pm Title: Splintering

ugh, Parker really makes me sick. I afraid of what's to come next.

Reviewer: Maddie Mae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 04:22 pm Title: Splintering

Wonderful! I'm sorry you had a crazy weekend but the chapter didn't show any signs! It was great and I can't wait to see the fight between Spike and Parker!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 - 04:20 pm Title: Splintering

Uh oh, I hope Spike will show up soon because I have a feeling things are about to get worse. She shouldn't worry all that much about Spike though. I'm pretty sure he could easily take Parker. I hope you had a good holiday=)

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