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Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2005 - 05:06 am Title: Shattered

Okay, not trying to be overly fussy, but shouldn't we be calling 911 if there's so much blood, and also, the first thing you want to do after a sexual assault may be to shower and clean up, but that's destroying any evidence that could be used for prosecution, and probly the best chance of putting Parker away. However, I still wanna see Spike get a chance to pummel him. Love this story.

Reviewer: Lala Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Shattered

I love this story. It's so heartbreaking and sweet. Does anyone mind is a kill Parker myself? :) Great chapter!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 10:22 pm Title: Shattered

loved it!! parker needs to pay!!!!!!!! please post soon.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 09:41 pm Title: Shattered

Will somebody please kill Parker! That major a$$! I hope Buffy's OK! Please hurry with the next update! :)

Reviewer: Jessiesaly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 09:33 pm Title: Shattered

No!!!! Don't end it there! Not there! Please! Could you post another chapter tonight for me? Please?

Reviewer: Kerrylee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: Shattered

Heartbreaking. At least Buffy felt safe going to Spike's fraternity. Can I make a suggestion??You should not have Faith help Buffy clean up.She should be taken to the police to file a report the way she is now.It might sound callouse,and Buffy is feeling dirty and wants to try and wash it all away,but it will be better for her in the long run is she dosent.Picture's don't lie,and she will need them as evidence.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: Shattered

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP. TONIGHT WOULD BE AWESOME. CANT WAIT FOR MORE.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 08:21 pm Title: Shattered

I have goosebumps! That was really powerful, your very very good at decribing the scene.

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 07:37 pm Title: Shattered

Wow! I';m sooo glad thatBuffy's finally going to someone for help! Can't wait for mroe, so please post the nextr chapter sas soon as you get the chance!

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 07:11 pm Title: Shattered

parker dies now! okay now that i've stated that, cause i know that you'll at least send him to the hospital with several broken bones, please write more soon. how is buffy and spike gonna deal? will she finally go to the police or at least move in to the frat with spike? i also like how you made faith and riley good people and i must say it is really weird(but in a good way) to have spike and riley and angel friends. more please soon.

Reviewer: stace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 07:10 pm Title: Shattered

parker must have known something was up right? i mean why was he there.. wasn't he sposed to be at a party? eek. i hope all this buffy abusing is going to end soon, pwease?

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 06:33 pm Title: Shattered

cant wait to see what happens next....

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Shattered

grr that bastard of Parker...Buffy send him to jail!! Awesome chapter! Well done :)

Reviewer: spikeztruluv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 05:13 pm Title: Shattered

Isay I am sorry in advance because I never critisize anyones work. I read Spuffy for the pure enjoyment of reading different tales. But why does she have to get bloddied and almost kiled and will she even leave the guy now???? Why did she have to sneak around on a brutal scumbag shes not even married to, has no kids for and has support from someone who cares for her, until this happens. Buffy get a grip, knee him in the groin, hit him in the nose, smash a lamp over his head and lets never be a victim again. Now that I have that off my chest will the entire frat give him a really good beat down and he please go to jail and become Big Bad Bubbas girlfriend.

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 04:44 pm Title: Shattered

Alright, that's it. I feel like going in your story and kicking Parker's sorry ass. If there's one thing I hate, it's guys beating on girls. They're just cowards and it's pretty sad to beat on someone that doesn't have the strength to fight back. I hope Spike does some serious damage to him. I'm also really glad that this story doesn't have Riley as the bad guy, I'm tired of reading those. Finally someone sees what a good guy he is and doesn't make him the bastard. Great story=)

Reviewer: alexandrea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 04:44 pm Title: Shattered

Great chapter it left me wanting more

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 04:41 pm Title: Shattered

Somebody ought to at least get the cops involved now. Unless he's total Mafia, it's doubtful he'll actually put a hit on anyone. At least a police report will go on his record, make his parents take notice. I doubt they'll want the publiicty over a stupid college fling.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 04:09 pm Title: Shattered

I can't believe it. I mean duh of course it was coming but wow. This was a veryr well written chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:34 pm Title: Shattered

OMG!!!! I want to KILL parker!!! WITH A SPOON!!! A WOODEN ONE!!! ARGH!!! Please update soon!!! Pretty please??? With cherries and Spike on top??

Reviewer: PK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:29 pm Title: Shattered

.........................whoa.

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:27 pm Title: Shattered

Okay, so, now we have to kill the fu**! I hate brutal men... Very scary chapter, I hope Buffy is okay and Parker burns in hell! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Shattered

Ok that's it Parker better start running like the hell-hounds are onto him...... Darn the guys better go out and go get it even with him.... can i juz skin him alive with a hot, soldering knife..... grrrrr.... cant wait for more! great chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 02:56 pm Title: Shattered

Oaky, it's time for someone to call the police. Faith's response to the frat boy's leering was a light hearted way to start this dark chapter.

Reviewer: Caatje Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 01:55 pm Title: Shattered

ah shit, what a moment to quit a chapter!! It's just terrible, disgusting and just unbelieveable what Parker did. Ugh, he makes my blood run cold. I want to hunt him down and hit him over the heade with a shovel...

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2005 - 01:45 pm Title: Shattered

aw poor buffy. im really glad buffy went to the fraternity house. i hope nothing really bad happened. awesome job. awesome chapter. cant wait for more.

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