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Reviewer: Aisling Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 03:49 pm Title: Fragmenting

Awwwww :D off to read the next bit

Reviewer: Reciprocity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2005 - 02:19 pm Title: Fragmenting

It's so sad...it makes me need ice cream, but it's really really really good. im looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Take care R

Reviewer: pj Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 - 01:31 am Title: Fragmenting

Argh, Parker needs to be taken care of soon please! Either that, or have Buffy gain some gall! Good job as usual!

Reviewer: phantomwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 11:52 pm Title: Fragmenting

::looks around nervously:: Duuuude, ya gotta keep updating. I'm enjoying these different pairings (besides Spuffy!) I like the Willow/Riley thing and the Angel/Faith thing. It's nice to see someone other than Angel as the abusive freak. I just hope that somehow or another it's Buffy that beats the crap outta Parker. Although I wouldn't be opposed to the guys doing it. ::sighs:: Yet again, great job.

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 05:34 am Title: Fragmenting

Aww! These last two chapters have been really awesome - I really loved them! Now that I'm finallyt back home, and can go online whenever (yay!) you can expect regular reviews agqin! Please update soon, cause I can't wait for more~!

Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 02:29 am Title: Fragmenting

oh i cant wait for more, soon please!!!

Reviewer: beverly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2005 - 12:12 am Title: Fragmenting

thanks for updating so soon and by the way this story is really comming along great

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 11:56 pm Title: Fragmenting

*whimper* That's just so sad!! It all seems so hopeless.... but of course you won't leave it like that, right? parker will get his and Buffy and Spike will ride off into the sunset, right?????????? Oh please let that happen, I can't WAIT for that to happen!!! This chapter was sad, but just so well written!! Keep it up and update soon!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 11:26 pm Title: Fragmenting

“…I feel like I’m cheating on you when I’m with him. And that’s silly because…because I obviously don’t have you.” “You have me,”--how terrilby sweet. The emotion of this story runs soo deep. It's hard to think of Buffy as someone who is trapped by anyone, but you've made it so real... and I just can't help but ache for all of them, because I just believe that these are real people, trapped in hopeless situations. I hope you can save them. Update soon.

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 11:02 pm Title: Fragmenting

Boo your chapters are too short! *pout* It was sweet that Spike offered to let Buffy move into the house, but could you imagine Parker's reaction to Buffy living with Spike, Angel, Riley, and Gunn? He'd probably put her in a coma. Eeek.

Reviewer: Laine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 10:49 pm Title: Fragmenting

aww.. when is parker getting out of the scene? he's starting to get on my nerves.. LOL anyway, love this update... i hope there's gonna some very serious parker bashing... with graphic detail and everything...

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Fragmenting

it is so true, abused women think they cant leave. You are very compassionate when writing this .....

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 08:28 pm Title: Fragmenting

parker is such a jerk he needs to be put in jail and become so big burly guys g/f. i hate it that spike and buffy can't be togther because of that idoit. i loved how spike just held her it was really sweet. can't wait for more update again soon.

Reviewer: Shady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 07:45 pm Title: Fragmenting

you're killing me... so sad, but sweet so wheres the rest?

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 07:35 pm Title: Fragmenting

aww that was really sad. gosh i hate parker. i really hope buffy lets spike take care of her and gets her away from parker because thats really sad. poor buffy. awesome chapter and story. cant wait for more. awesome job.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 06:00 pm Title: Fragmenting

Ok- someone needs to hit parker with a mac truck (that way it can't be blamed on S or B! That man needs to die soon and very painfully! It's so sweet that Spike just holds Buffy and comforts her and is there for her but with this new network he's got going surly they can do something about Parker - how about faith comming onto parker and when he tries to hit her she beats the holy-hell outta him and then lets say her Dad is the mayor and he has the police use lots of brute force on him and them he goes to prison where he becomes the favorite butt moneky of some some 300lb live-in lover named Killer and then when Killer gets tired or his whiney ass he gets killed in prison by Killer's new love toy (beaten to death) and then we have so much Spuffiness and the end... yeah I like the sceanio. Truthfully - I LOVE THIS STORY and I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE but PLEASE let at least a few small things REALLY BAD happen to Parker REAL SOON! I want to see him suffer! THANKS FOR SHARING!

Reviewer: Maddie Mae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 05:59 pm Title: Fragmenting

I can't wait to see what happens with Parker. I love this story and I hope you can update soon!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 05:43 pm Title: Fragmenting

Buffy staying with Parker to protect her friends and family makes sense, but I hope there's some clever way to get him arrested in the future.

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 05:29 pm Title: Fragmenting

Spike is really sweet...Buffy dump that bloody idiot of Parker!! Awesome chapter!! Well done :)

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 05:23 pm Title: Fragmenting

Aww, its such a sad story right now but i Love it and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: kayla Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 04:43 pm Title: Fragmenting

more

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 04:26 pm Title: Fragmenting

That was pretty emotional for the two of them... I seriously cant wait for the day Parker's face goes flat into the ground.... LOve it, waiting for more!!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 03:56 pm Title: Fragmenting

I seriously hope Parker gets a severe ass kicking, whether it's from Spike or one of the other guys, even Buffy coming to her senses and kicking his ass would be good. I don't know how anyone could stay with a guy that's abusive. She has to realize that she's not alone and Spike will be there to help her. This was another very emotional chapter from you and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Spikes Sweety Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 03:37 pm Title: Fragmenting

I love this story so much!

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 - 03:27 pm Title: Fragmenting

Oh, I'm definitely hoping someone has a gun! Please, update soon. This is so 'real' it's scary. Luv, Spuf

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