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Reviewer: H Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: So Close...So Far

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Reviewer: Cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 05:56 pm Title: So Close...So Far

I wonder now -
If Spike will backtrack again when he sees her again next day
If the other will treat her like an adult.
Loved the chapter - looking forward to find out more about the question above and what will happen next!

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 05:44 pm Title: So Close...So Far

YAY!!! how sweet! Awesome chapter!! Well done :)

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: So Close...So Far

Oh boy. Buffy may be on cloud nine from his lips now, but when Spike gives her the old "I shouldn't have done that and let's pretend it never happened" speech, as he will inevitably do, she is going to be heartbroken. Boy oh boy, you are weaving some incredible angst here. I can just see that fragile heart of Buffy's dangling precariously on a shelf, just waiting for the right nudge to send it crashing to the ground. You have perfectly captured Buffy's voice and emotions for the age she is at. Wonderful chapter Ashlee. I can't wait to see the morning after the kiss.

Reviewer: bex makes u fly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 05:09 pm Title: So Close...So Far

great chapter!! spike is finnaly noticing her and it was so sweet the way u described the feather light touch of the kiss she had wanted for so long!! it was much better than i hoped the first kiss could be like and i cant wait for the next chapter!! please be as fast as possible and as good as this one!!

Reviewer: Ashly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 04:50 pm Title: So Close...So Far

Aww I loved it! I just started reading it and just gotta say it's awsome! Can't wait for more! Update soon.

Reviewer: Danie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 04:47 pm Title: So Close...So Far

Well'm new and I really really like your story!!! Keep it up!!!

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 04:07 pm Title: So Close...So Far

MMMMMMMM! Lips of Spike! I hope he doesn't do anything stupid now... Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Juanita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 03:11 pm Title: So Close...So Far

What else can I say other than WOOHOO!

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 03:08 pm Title: So Close...So Far

EEE! Happy sqeuals. Mmm, looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Ash Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: So Close...So Far

I've been away for a bit, but now that I'm back, there were so many chapters to read! Awesome chapters... This story is evolving really well.

Reviewer: Scarlet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 02:46 pm Title: So Close...So Far

This is so sweet. I love it.

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 02:19 pm Title: So Close...So Far

Awwww! Yay!! Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Caatje Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 02:19 pm Title: So Close...So Far

*squeels* This is so cool Their first 'sexual' encounter. Even if it's just a brush of lips, it's still... EEK! So fabulous! Please update soon!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2005 - 02:17 pm Title: So Close...So Far

Aww yay! A hint of spuffy! That was nice! I love this line: "When you’re done trying to sneak into the house, we’d like to talk to you." That was funny!! Very good. Well, awesome chapter! Update soon!

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