Date: 07/07/2005 - 06:55 am Title: The End of the Beginning
Very tender sweet and prolific ending to the beginning.......leaves things open if you want to come back and play if the muse would hit you.......lovely.......
Date: 07/07/2005 - 06:38 am Title: The End of the Beginning
i am glad that their will be a part 2 because i was sad to see this story end so soon and i am loving your new story criminal games so far keep up the good work
Date: 07/07/2005 - 06:01 am Title: The End of the Beginning
LUV it! Want a next part yay! but... would love to read Criminal Games too... so first go and finish that.
Date: 07/07/2005 - 05:25 am Title: The End of the Beginning
"…if anyone is interested." -- That's a joke right? Of COURSE we're interested!! Have you seen (literally) the thousands of reviews you have for this story alone!? Really awesome chapter! I can't wait for Part II!!
Date: 07/07/2005 - 05:07 am Title: The End of the Beginning
Part 2 as in a sequel or a second epilogue? I enjoyed this story. Did want to strangle some characters at certain points, but overall it was a pleasant experience to read. {winks} Nice writing, and good work on this story. It's hard to keep a plotline going and interesting for 40 chapters. You handled it quite well. You are an excellent writer. Always happy to read your work.
Date: 07/07/2005 - 04:46 am Title: The End of the Beginning
perfect ending. and are you kidding of course we want part two. cant wait for that one to begin.
Date: 07/07/2005 - 03:03 am Title: The End of the Beginning
Well, now I'm just sobbing like a baby! Great story and thank you for sharing it with us! Luv, Spuf
Date: 07/07/2005 - 02:52 am Title: The End of the Beginning
I loved it!! Can't wait for part 2. Lol!! ~Ashley~