

Date: 02/11/2006 - 05:51 pm Title: The First Party
what a great story!! i loved it.. im a work and I almost got in trouble with my boss b/c i was reading this and not getting any work done. lol i just couldn't put it down.. it is such a great story!! can't wait for the next chapter!! keep updating.
Author's Response: Aww, shucks, Briana! Thank you! But, also, *shakes finger at Briana* bad girl. No getting in trouble at work, even if it's all for the sake of Spuffy. Wait... what am I saying? Reading Spuffy beats work everyday! :) Thanks for reviewing!

Date: 02/11/2006 - 09:10 am Title: The First Party
Loving this story. I like young William stories. I like the Summers family subplot. I'm confused as to why Buffy doesn't want William to know who she is though.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! As to the confusion, it'll be explained better next chapter... William's gonna say some things, and Buffy's gonna think about them... interesting, huh? lol.

Date: 02/11/2006 - 07:13 am Title: The First Party
Mmmh-hmmm Hank said "my wonderful young daughter, Dawn" and only "my elder daughter, Elizabeth" ... That tells everything what he thinks of which daughter. And it seems Buffy knows what to think of Parker. He and Cecily deserve one another :)
Author's Response: Kudos for catching that little thing that Hank said! And I wanted Parker to be a big stupid-head to Buffy straight off. It helps with the William/Buffy relationship.

Date: 02/10/2006 - 08:30 pm Title: The First Party
sooo looooove this fic...really it's one of my favourites... congrats to your beta too, you're both doing a fantastic job!! please pretty please **begging here** update soon!! thanx ;)
Author's Response: Really, one of your fav's? *blushes* Well, thank you! And I'll tell Dev of his fantastic-ness! Thanks for the review!

Date: 02/10/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: The First Party
I do so enjoy William fics and this looks set to be a good one. I like the fact that, despite the period setting, we can already see some of the Buffy and Spike that we got to know on BtVS. I mean, William's proudly love's bitch and Buffy's befriending a member of the 'loser' set upon arriving in town since she doesn't give a damn about the supposed social consequences. In contrast to some of the darker and angstier fics I've been following lately this one reminds of the slogan for a breakfast cereal we have here in NZ - "it's nice and light and really tasty". Heh, can't wait for the next serving! 8-)
Author's Response: Love the quote! Hopefully you'll continue to think so in the future! Thanks for reviewing!

Date: 02/10/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: The First Party
well... there was no dru lurking in the shadow...but after your response i fear to see her popping from a cake at a party... and that's way more horrible! lol
the infamous scene was good... i like how you added buffy (& parker) to the mix
and do i see some spike in william's stubborness to pursue cecily anyway?
Author's Response: Well, since Spike has so much William in him, I wanted to sort of mix them together... or at least add a little spice of Spike to him. Mmmm.... spice of Spike... lol! I'm being weird now. Thanks for your review!

Date: 02/10/2006 - 12:26 pm Title: The First Party
Guess Hank's not gonna be too happy 'bout Parker's face getting in the way of Buffy's water :) Wonder how Buffy plans on helping Wiliiam.
Author's Response: Well, wonder away my sweet, sweet Devin. You'll find out pretty soon. Tuesday, I'm thinkin'. *raises eyebrows in an 'eh?' manner*

Date: 02/10/2006 - 10:58 am Title: The First Party
You are doing such a good job with your characters. Geat chapter. Could you do something violent to Hank?
Author's Response: lol. I'll think about it. By the end of this story, maybe Hank will have gotten what he deserved. Thanks for the review!

Date: 02/10/2006 - 10:35 am Title: The First Party
can't wait for mroe. i hope william gets with buffy in the end. i have a feeling that anne would like her. and i hope that hank gets beat up. more soon please.
Author's Response: lol. I always thought she would like her, too. I'll try to update soon!

Date: 02/10/2006 - 10:01 am Title: The First Party
I hate it when guys are like that! It's sooo frustrating when they're big 'projecty pants' and make a girl to be perfect when she's not.
Author's Response: Oh, I know it! Guys can really be blockheads sometimes! Thanks for the review!

Date: 02/10/2006 - 09:57 am Title: The First Party
Nice update.
Author's Response: Thanks!