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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2012 - 05:02 am Title: Post Blue

Steamy, great tension!

A few issues in this chap and the previous, mostly that I still think you are better off using "laying" all the times you've used "laid."

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 - 02:06 pm Title: Post Blue

You painted a vivid, emotional picture of the confusion between these two. They're both feeling so pervy for being attracted to their sibling, it's making each encounter awkward. It's very entertaining.

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 07:10 pm Title: Post Blue

The sexual tension is electric! Someone's gotta give in again soon! Love it :-)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2009 - 05:56 pm Title: Post Blue

They are both in denial about their attraction. Snuggling, huh? Silly Spike ;)
Wasn't so easy to ignore, the nearness.

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2009 - 05:38 am Title: Post Blue

OMG...Lovely, lovely UUUSSSSTT

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2009 - 03:17 am Title: Post Blue

Having slightly more Spike POV works well in this chapter because of how passionate we expect him to be towards Buffy. Who hasn't had those little moments of trying to reign their libido in during that awkward, take-it-slow stage. It's too bad that they don't quite realize that they have a budding romance.

What I love most about your story is the slow build you're giving us. It's like climbing a forest trail--you can feel the temperature cooling, the air thinning, catch glimpses of the view (the kiss), but enjoying the little things along the way until you can get the full panorama. Great chapter.

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2009 - 03:07 am Title: Post Blue

oohhhhh, I am waiting for more....

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2009 - 07:40 pm Title: Post Blue

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2009 - 06:27 pm Title: Post Blue

Sorry to hear about your back , sweetie. Maybe you should go and have a nice massage. Thanks for the chapter! Great tension building between the two.

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