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Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Recuperation

This is really very cool, there was already a good mystery and now here's Wes and Gunn.

I dig the overall flow of your story as well, (less the spelling mistakes that confuse) you mix in action/drama really well. I have read a ton of theses stories, and pacing is often times the weakest part of any given story. You keep things moving along, and so far that has kept me all the way involved in your tale.

Reviewer: Vette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2013 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 4 - Recuperation

Things just got interesting with Wesley showing up. How did he find them?

Reviewer: Rabbit-moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2013 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Recuperation

Have read all the chapters so far, and love the whole premise! Wonderful!

I am soooo waiting for the next chapter! Pleeeze!

Reviewer: Rabbit-moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2013 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter 4 - Recuperation

Wow! I really like your story! Im totally hooked! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2013 - 08:46 am Title: Chapter 4 - Recuperation

Very good, they react so well.

Reviewer: rachelmcd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2013 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Recuperation

I love this story! I just found this when you posted this last chapter but im already hooked. please oh please update soon! I cant wait to see where this goes and what wesleys doing there

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2013 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Recuperation

Nice twist., wasn't expecting that. Hopefully Wes will have some information on whose behind this. Great update.

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