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Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2006 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

dun dun DUN...hmm, I wonder what Buffy did to make her a target for assasination. Cute morning scene with Buffy and Spike--at least she didn't take the "I love you" thing TOO bad. Also, I'm really enjoying this futuristic setting--very ingenious.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2005 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

I absolutely LOVED Gunn in this chapter. From bad mouthing Spike's car, to asking if he could have Buffy, he was great. And I actually have a certain amount of sympathy for Hank. He's a jerk, but at least he's trying to protect her, even if he's going about it in the wrong way (but I think that's just a male trait LOL).

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

Your plot is intriguing and this is a good story. It could be a fantastic story; however, you need a beta that knows the difference between your and you're, to and too, who's and whose (etc...I could go on and on). These little grammatical errors detract somewhat from the story. So, please get a beta.

Author's Response: My beta Eternal and I work on these stories very early in the morning. We shot the story back and forth updating it with each revision and sometimes we slip up. Sorry about that, our main goal to to have a quality story and there is no excuse for those errors. We both promise to be more diligent in the future :)

Reviewer: Devils_at_play Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

I just caught up, this story is ***** amazing. Update SOON!!

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

please have more to their relationship than just the physical!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

What did she dooooo??? And the soulmates thing??? omg!! The way you put it, with the painting and everything!! SOOOO nice!!!

Reviewer: Tabby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

You going at a nice pace, things are going pretty slick. I got a vamp movie for ya 'The Addiction' its vamps trying to live a normal life resulting with the amazing blood orgy at the granduation party, very Buffy like.

Author's Response: Ohhh one I haven't seen...must run and check it out now :) Another good one is Vlad or possibly Dracula with the same guy as Dracula in BTVS. It's more about the man that was Vlad and it's really neat.!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

Awe, poor Spike - in fear of getting grilled :-D
I wonder what Buffy did do ..

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

Aha is this something she did in a previous life maybe as the slayer.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 - 11:16 am Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

i really like this story its really good and its getting really interesting please update soon thanx i cant wait to know more pleae make it soon thanx

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad your liking it so far :)

Reviewer: tahmoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter 8: Blood and phone calls

i found this chapter very humorous. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for updating the story with two chapters. Its rare but appreciated. This story is getting better and better. I can't wait to find out what Buffy did that causing the new danger. Look forward to the next update or two :)...lol

Author's Response: I was really in a laughing mood, just a bit of funny before the big bad revelation :)

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