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Reviewer: procida Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2013 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Change the World'

Good job the characters are deep and particular and anyone has a special personal story. You have to work on sex scenes cause they aren't at the dame level of the parts of the story

Reviewer: Cassiopea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 08:27 am Title: Chapter 14: 'Change the World'

Love your story , but please don't me shy for the love scenes , you're doing fine. I like the dynamic between Spike and Buffy.

Author's Response: I always loved the banter between our duo! Just watch and see how great a team they are in dealing with the murder, the bad guys and each other! thanks luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2005 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Change the World'

but you have a funny way to write the love scene here :-D
So Buffy fled - wonder what she'll say when she meets Spike again.

Author's Response: Well, we'll soon know because Spike tracks Buffy down in the next chapter! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2005 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter 14: 'Change the World'

lovely chapter! :) please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll probably update tonight. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2005 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Change the World'

I hate writing sex scenes, too...I'm actually procrastinating on writing one right now LOL I love this story! And you're right- it is definitely like Buffy to bolt the morning after. Great update:)

Author's Response: Thanks, I kind of wrote myself into a corner on this fic. I'm hoping to update more now. Luv, Spuf

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