A fun and charming fic. Needs a few errors cleaned up, but overall it's very well written and easy to read. Got a little confusing in the middle when Buffy first finds out about the LAPD activities (that section seemed like it might have been written hurriedly), and Buffy being angry at Spike's deception when she went to spy on him herself didn't make much sense, but those are minor quibbles.

OMG I've just read from start to finish and that was wicked. I absolutely loved every single word, all the ups and downs. Only thing is I'm not sure what happened to Dru. I so hope Gunn bumped her off because she so deserved it. This is the kind of story that makes me realise why I love to read Spuffy and why I read and don't write - I could never come up with anything to compare. It was truly fab.

See, finishing a fic is weird...that's why I'm still obscenely behind on MBB, trying to figure out that fact htat LC is done...and I loved your story...made me feel like crap about my writing, but I loved it...you're really such a great writer and now I'll have to figure out some time to read your other stories as well...though I'll probably have to figure out balancing the reading with the writing of some of my not-as-good-as-yours fics...you seem to get a little annoyed with me if I don't send you anything...don't know why though..hmmmm, I'll have to ask you about that later. Anyway, great fic and I'm so glad I read it and I hope you like my nutso reviews :-)

Author's Response: Aww, I don't get annoyed! Whether or not you send me stuff, I love your writing =) I get super-excited when you do send me stuff, but I'm definitely never annoyed at you for not sending them! *hugs* If I'm giving off annoy-ed-ness vibes, sorry! Because really, I don't think I've ever been annoyed with you =D Thanks soo much for all the reviews, both screwball and not...they made me happy *more hugs* And I love that you love this fic, but please don't ever think your fic isn't as good, cuz it is. So yay team you =) And THANK YOU!!! *is VERY MUCH not annoyed!*

You're a little twisted, sweetie. Great writer, but kinda twisted.

yeah, yeah...you're evil...gonna send all he mean people after you if you don't make it better.

Okay, remember how I decided to not read your stuff before I write because mine will pale in comparison? I sorta forgot that rule..oops...we'llsee if I can manage to write anyway.

I'm running out of fun reveiwness to leave..that's what happens when I don't sleep enough.

That's why I'm giving you a review, because you like them...and because you deserve them :-)

Ha! You get two reviews from me for this chapter...I finished updating LC so now I get to review again.

Great chapter (Im starting with normal reviews now)

Mean, mean, mean, mean you !

You're making this get all complicated missy. I liked it htough :-)

What's with you and all your sneaky little secret conversations? Hmm, missy...Okay..I need to really get to my writing, but I'm weird enough that I'm worried with what I'd come up with.