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Reviewer: Nic (Smitten) Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 09:19 pm Title: 26

OMG i had tears just thinking about Spike up there singing that hehe Freakin awesome chapter it was!

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 09:13 pm Title: 26

Oh my god. That was great. I really love this storry, and I'm so sorry I haven't been reviewining regularly, but I keep hitting refresh to find out when you've updated. I love this. This is just. . . its great.

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: 25

YES to the Spike doing karoake, that sounds absolutely hilarious! So...Fred and Johnathan, huh? they'd make a cute couple, although wouldn't he be like 6 inches shorter than she is? lol kidding i think it's cute. can't wait for the update now that i'm finally caught up =)

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 05:03 pm Title: 24

lol drunken spike. nice touch =) wonder what Buffy's going to say, and what spike'll say back...

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 04:28 pm Title: 23

YESSSSSS!!! Harmony ass-kickage! although the angst at the end was not so fun... =( still, awesome chapter!

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 04:15 pm Title: 22

great speech by spike, good explanation of how buffy feels, and hot kiss at the end =) still loving this story!

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 04:05 pm Title: 21

major, major sniffles. and squeals. ok, i know it's cliche, but this chapter was so sweet! I loved how Spike was all caring about the baby and Buffy's starting to believe him...simply sublime. the song lyrics were good, too. also, and the 'he-she' thing about the baby? nice touch!

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:56 pm Title: 20

awwww (again) very very sweet chapter. stupid buffy though, why can't she just tell him she loves him? gr. =)

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:43 pm Title: 19

yikes. spike sounds mad. so glad they finally kissed, though!

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:08 pm Title: 18

oooh, it just got WAY more interesting...not that it wasn't before. i'm so glad you added Lorne. he's an awesome character and you write him perfectly.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 12:48 pm Title: 25

Me Me Me! I'm up for Spike doing some karoake ! ! ! :-D Good chapter; loved that Buffy opened up more to Spike. And it seems that Jonathan has had a girlfriend for Harm, huh? Looking forward for more.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 11:03 am Title: 25

me! me! me! i'm up for anything with spike!! ;) lol lovely chapter loved it!! now we're getting somewhere with the "other" plot ;) thanx so much, you did an awesome job

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 11:03 am Title: 25

yeah Spike singing, woo hoo! i like the way you brought Fred into the story. Buffy & Lorne together makes me laugh so much. i love him, no one writes Lorne like you do. you capture his essence so well. loved the Spuffy, and how Spike wouldn't get tired of telling Buffy he loved her. Loved Spikes defensiveness. Update soon!

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 09:44 am Title: 25

Aw isn't Spike the sweetest? I mean he's not perfect and he's made mistakes but he is just so devoted to Buffy. I loved their conversation. And who can say no to Spike karaoke? Can't wait. =)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 08:44 am Title: 25

Last chapter's talk with Angel was great, thanks for making him supportive and smart - it's a nice change of pace. Spike's tipsy flirting was sweet, too, and I love how angry and possessive he got when he heard about Harmony's aggression. Harmony is headed for a smack down. Spike and Buffy are not perfect, they're both opening up and the dialogue is natural and in character. I like how the plan to stop the wedding is coming together. If (when) Harmony loses Jonathan to Fred, there's going to be quite a scene!

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 05:58 am Title: 25

Loving the Spuffy. It is your storyline... not asking you to change a thing. But I am wondering if Buffy is not wrong for thinking she can barge in and control J. like his parents did. Maybe the H-J relationship is more like she and Spike than Buffy realizes. Maybe Harmony is the piece that fits.. that completes him. Just a thought.

Reviewer: spikes slayer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 02:26 am Title: 25

yes yes and more yes for the spike kareoke question. great chapter and i hope harmoney gets what she deserves in the end...she totally has it comming!

Reviewer: Nic (Smitten) Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 01:56 am Title: 25

MEMEMEMEME I want some hehe absolutely great chapter as always!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 01:13 am Title: 25

*WOOHOO's for the Spike karaoke* Lord, where have I been. Just caught up on the last 4 chapters. Awesome job! It just gets better and better. *AND THANK YOU FOR THE HARMONY SLAPPAGE* I've been wanting to do that for YEARS!

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 12:53 am Title: 25

Me...Me...(jumping up and down with hand in the air)...I'm up for Spike and karaoke!!! Great chapters!!! Love the Angel/Buffy sibling bonding...and Spike's reassurances of love and trust to Buffy...and I'm really glad that Buffy's letting him in...now I'm interested in the Fred/Jonathan pairing...especially after the whole Harmony thing....can't wait for more!!!!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 12:36 am Title: 25

Yeah! Karoake Spike! And loving the Lorne. And Fred! We've got Fred. Love it when the gang all shows up. And Spike and Buffy are progressing so nicely with there relationship. Very wonderfully done. Update soon... though you do that really well without my asking. :)

Reviewer: carri Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 12:26 am Title: 25

Hmm, I wonder what song Spike is going to pick? Loved the chapter and how patient they both are in working their issues out. You're so talented as a writer. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: Mac Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2005 - 11:40 pm Title: 25

Well, first of all I am quite concerned about you. Three updates so fast together, I've hardly read one when the next one pops up. I do hope you're okay, not home recovering from some horrid bug with a lot of time on your hands. Can't have that. HOWEVER, loving the frequent updating so as long as you're fine I say whoo hoo!! As for the last three chapters, just wonderful. I love that you had a real honest to God altercation there with Harmony. That's not going away anytime soon. And loving how you've threaded both Lorne and Fred into this. Angel is a great big brother figure as you've drawn him, the big old buttmunch. *g* You've got us all tied up in quivering anticipation here, and thankfullly you seem primed to deliver. Thanks bunches Brat. Keep em comin'. :-)

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2005 - 11:17 pm Title: 25

which song will it be?

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2005 - 11:15 pm Title: 24

love that you did two chapters today! go you go!

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