Date: 04/10/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Ten-Some Things Never Change
Dang ... can't wait for the next update. This just keeps getting better. I hope that Giles and the vampire fighting force doesn't take Buffy away from Spike. I mean I know that they probably should, but I think that would tear them both apart. We'll see what happens next. Giles always did think that he knew just who WIlliam the Bloody was, but he was wrong in more ways than one. Let's hope this Giles realizes he is wrong before he does something that will destroy Buffy completely.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter Two- Things Change
And so it really begins. Quite an intense relationship they have there. Quite the sinister Spike too. Another wonderful chapter.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter One- A Whole New World
"She was anticipating a Dracula or maybe a Lestat, not freakin’ punk boy. "--That's pretty cool, watching this plain human Buffy getting "punk boy" all in a tizzy. And I must say, she's taking this slave thing really well. Not to mention the vampire discovery thing. That's one tough little Buffy. Great chapter.
Date: 04/09/2005 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
i just started reading this story and i gotta say i love what i've read so far. this is a very interesting plot and it just gets better with every chapter that i read. your doing a great job and i can't wait to see wehre this is going next.
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
Wonder how their plan will work out. Looking forward for more :-D
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Eight- Aftermath
I hope Spike and Buffy won't be in danger because that Bronze night - more than they were before..
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Seven- A Night Out
Wow - very unexpected at the end - good turn. I wonder if / what will change now.
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Six- A Vampire's Layers
But Buffy seems to warm to Spike too. Lovely chapter. Another one to read ....
Date: 04/08/2005 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter Five- Revelations
Wow - interesting turn. He acknowledged his feelings... and than that last sentence .. Nighmare? His clan? Or AngelL/Dru? *reading on*
Date: 04/08/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter Four -New Wardrobe
Oh my - seems to me Spike is falling for her .. very hard :)
Date: 04/08/2005 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Three-Decisions
I still like the way this story goes ... seems more Spike is moving (changing) towards Buffy than Buffy is changing towards Spike :)
Date: 04/08/2005 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter Two- Things Change
Oh my - I first thought Buffy would be the perfect "Slave" (meaning doing what Spike wanted) but she has her own head :)
Date: 04/08/2005 - 04:17 pm Title: Chapter One- A Whole New World
I never read it before - but I'll start now. Haven't noticed it before, but I think - after reading the plot - it will be very good - I hope so ;-)
Date: 04/04/2005 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
Really enjoying this story! Great storyline. Can't wait to read more. :)
Date: 04/04/2005 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
hey i love the storyand was going to take a look at your website but the link isn't working. is the address the same or is there some other way i can get to it. keep up the good work and i hope i can check out your website soon.
Date: 04/03/2005 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
oh, how sweet!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
I absolutely love this story so far, I really do! It's just so interesting to see the progression of their relationship and how it went from creepy and wretched to more realistic, almost as if they he was human and they weren't in the situation they're in. Damon kinda bothers me (and rightfully so LOL), and I think Natasha's going to band together with him...maybe. I can't wait to read more!:)
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
and being loves bitch for her is going to create some problems...Please update soon, I'm addicted!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
Wow! I can't believe I read all 9 chappies. I only planned on reading a few, but your story is awesome!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
Where have you been hiding this fic! It's excellent! Your characterizations are wonderfult. Too bad Angel and Dru will be coming in to spoil things soon (right?) And will Spike get his soul for her? Will she claim him back? More, Please!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Eight- Aftermath
Another awesome chapter! Little concerned about what's going to happen....is Buffy displaying any of her Slayer powers?
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter Seven- A Night Out
Whew! I was worried it'd get ugly when she staked that vampire! It definitely worked in her favor--and Spike's!! You're doing such a great job and portraying the confliction emotions BUffy is having. It makes complete sense she should feel that way. Good job :)
Date: 04/03/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Nine-Unraveling
Just wanted to leave a little note saying that I am really enjoying reading this peice of fiction. It's very well written, angsty and erotic all at the same time. And the characters are really well done. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 04/03/2005 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter Six- A Vampire's Layers
Nice reference to Byron. :) He's my favorite! This oughtta be intersting!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter Six- A Vampire's Layers
Nice reference to Byron. :) He's my favorite! This oughtta be intersting!
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